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Mastermind
03-01-2006, 11:32 PM
this something ...

I use utensils like neo-gothic steel tip pencils to engrave,
666 permanent prints of “mastermind” on your forehead/
just so you remember the name before your dead/
encrypt ancient Masonic manuscripts into basic English semantics/
the livest "phonetic mechanic / on the planet/
my thoughts process at elusive speed/ the illest lyrical miscreant/
ya’ll don’t wanna step to this/ my rhymes are the sickest/
next to an aids patient infected with tuberculosis/ mastermind an Ill modified/
rhyme device/ so nice on the mic one verse will eat you twice/ you heard it right/
I’ll snatch the retina from your fibre optics so you cant see me visually/
lyrically.. monkey emcee’s like you cease to exist once they enter my vicinity/
mastermind the only superior divinity/ when I step up/ mics just incinerate to dust/
with merely a touch/ I’m to complex / I snap necks/ i'm lyrically divine/
death is only the beginning for those who mess with the mastermind…

how ya like it???

DeA†h
03-01-2006, 11:34 PM
lol,...i saw no flow but this one looks like it should in the bust a rhyme

Donnie-Darkflow
03-02-2006, 12:54 AM
i liked it an yeah you should of put it in busta rhyme

Darkness
03-02-2006, 03:24 AM
that was good, i liked the vocab

Mastermind
03-06-2006, 09:00 AM
thanx ya'll

chelsy
03-06-2006, 11:27 AM
busted!


:(

chelsy
03-06-2006, 11:27 AM
i repped ya mindy!:(

DavidThrows
03-12-2006, 04:42 PM
original never fail'swith merely a touch/ I’m to complex / I snap necks/ i'm lyrically divine/

Khorne
04-02-2006, 04:56 AM
its nice to see someone with a vocabulary and a greater-than-5th-grade reading comprehension level drop some shit.

chelsy
04-02-2006, 10:03 AM
^??
...

Khorne
04-02-2006, 03:02 PM
im trying to say it sounded alot more mature, bigger words, more complex ideas....

chelsy
04-03-2006, 03:46 PM
^oh! :)