This is from me to you
I believe it's true
Forgiveness may seem inconcievable
but it's what you need to do
You need to let go
before the echo of life is bleedin through
Are you so sinless?
We have to reach within us and seek anew

I forgive my father for hurtin my mother
I forgive children who made life a living Hell
I forgive my ex, I take the words from another
"Before I met her, I was quite the dimming shell"
I know she loved me, I forgive her breaking my heart
And I forgive her for the times she made me feel worthless
I forgive her because that hurt is still playing a part
and all of that anger, makes me know my real purpose
I forgive those who have thrown dirt on my name
and those who left me thrown out in the wind
Sometimes instead of trying to work I complain
I forgive myself for that , I just doubted my kin
I forgive my first love for fucking some guy
even though she said I was her perfect accomplice
I remember I would cry looking up at the sky
remembering moments I thought "it's worth it to stop this"
I forgive God for loving me and giving me heart
I always felt life would be better if it never existed
I realize now tragedy coincides with a victories start
I could never change a life, I would forever have missed it
I forgive the apalling men constantly falling for sin
leading women to never trust a word I express
I forgive my impatience, 'fore it's calling again
and I forgive the pessemistic, it'll work for the best

This is from me to you
I believe it's true
Forgiveness may seem inconcievable
but it's what you need to do
You need to let go
before the echo of life is bleedin through
Are you so sinless?
We have to reach within us and seek anew

Didn't read it but i bet it's really good

That's beautiful...I like the part about forgiving yourself...hard to do.

this reminds me of what I had to do for myself in my early twenties.
My heart hurt when I read this as I could understand .
Josh it is a long road to forgiveness but it seems u r heading in the right direction.

lol...Thaaanks.

that was really good man fo poetry id have to give it a ten a fuckin ten

I swear I've read this one before? Yeah, it's good.

Word. I like it, like all of your work. The concept of this piece of so touching. Forgiveness. Not many have the ability and inner-power to actually be able to forgive. It takes strength and great understanding.

Mad props.

*thinks

forgiveness has give in it so would you forgive that much to right a whole
page on it ,your view is saying you were stuck on the word love lady killer

Forgiveness is an integral part of me world view...mayble even the most important.

actually read it for the second time nice accomplishment

That was bad ass, It actually hepled me in a way...I'm sure you dont know what i'm talkin about but thanks

forgiveness.

i can't do it.

your a mad writer joshy babe.