View Full Version : My rap isn't anything compared to his


DevilGril188
10-14-2002, 10:41 PM
Im about to start rapping
so get your fingers snapping
I don't wanna flip out
Don't you make me shout
I don't care if im cool
I get your a** kicked out of school.
Your not just messing with me
your messing with all you see
I don't want to be the person in your joke.
but i am so i laugh when you sit there and
start to choke
Everyone panics they don't want to see the most popular person die cause of me.
So hang with your buddies out side of school
But don't you dare even try to make me look like the fool.
Just cause i would rather stay home and listen to the radio hits.
Every word you say is chopping my heart in to bits.
Im the lunitic huh, don't you tell me that.
I knock you over the head with my thirty pound bat.
Don't call me a liar, don't mess it's no bluff.
My lungs get blacker with each single puff.
Put you'll be laying in the bed,
People will consider you dead.
I'll be running the track
No matter how much i hack.
My bros got my back.
Can you say the same.
I don't wannna hear your excuse it will just be lame.

*A*
10-14-2002, 10:42 PM
would be better off you put this in the right forum

-NinjaMic-
10-14-2002, 11:17 PM
You're right.

Shady Makaveli
10-15-2002, 12:46 AM
:-/ @ I've actually seen worse here... At least there's no flagrant biting...

soldier4eva69
10-15-2002, 11:00 PM
ummm....wrong forum there......i think u may wanna go to Bust-a-Rhyme......that could help a lil.......but it needs to flow better

brunk
10-16-2002, 08:15 PM
hahahahaahhahaahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhahahahaaaaaaaaaaa...ok I'm done

Tyke
10-16-2002, 08:18 PM
no, keep on, I'm sure someone gives a fuck

lena
10-16-2002, 08:29 PM
i think it was reallly nice! :-)

brunk
10-16-2002, 08:33 PM
Originally posted by Tyke
no, keep on, I'm sure someone gives a fuck

you seemed to enough to reply...