i know i aint that good, but this like the 6th i ever made up, so i'm sure i'l improve....

Why’m I waistin ma time writin a rhyme, I cant even tell the time/
the chance is mine to commit a crime an leave y’al te do the time/
now check this flow or don’t ye know, I’l go toe to toe, do the dosey doh/
ye better let yer mama know, she left her dildo, does yer daddy know/
ok now its time to go cos am loosin ma flow but yeah u already know.

no offense,but u definetly gotta practice.

lol...

lol, you rhymed "time" with "time" and then "know" with "know" you need to elevate a lot. When you have music on, listen to the music, don't hear it and pick up on things arists do and try to use certain methods they use, multies, punches, blah, blah.

^yeah lisn to this guy he help me evealuate alot hez a good guy like that

lol, you rhymed "time" with "time" and then "know" with "know" you need to elevate a lot. When you have music on, listen to the music, don't hear it and pick up on things arists do and try to use certain methods they use, multies, punches, blah, blah.

cheers for the advice man... an btw i know i'm shit... like i said i aint ever wrote before, prob bext stickin to ma drawin .. lol.. i'l practise though

it would be betta if you didnt rhyme the same words

Why’m I waistin ma time writin a rhyme, I cant even commit a crime/
the chance is mine to commit a crime an leave y’al te do the time/
now check this flow or don’t ye know, I’l go toe to toe, do the dosey doh/
ye better let yer mama know, she left her dildo, does yer daddy know/
ok now its time to go cos am loosin ma flow but yeah i already show/.


lol i dont know i just redide it so it didnt have the same word rhymes

Yer the best textcee on EW,D.O.A

LOL next to XasPhaN

Naah,..i ain't the best

riddler is the best

naw ninjamic is the best

Everyone On Eminemweb SUCK!!!

Plain and simple

except for me :)

lol,...u wish

^yeah lisn to this guy he help me evealuate alot hez a good guy like that


LOL!

I don't like to grass...but er that's not exactly what you told me and Legend last night.

Sorry, just don't like 2 faced people :)

What ye all like, ye always gota make it about yer selv's.... lol

Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Hi. Suck my dick.

LOL!

I don't like to grass...but er that's not exactly what you told me and Legend last night.

Sorry, just don't like 2 faced people :)


i jus said i didnt like his audio but at text hez good thats all i said biznich

an i was jus try to help legend wit hiz game aight jadizzil

Yer the best textcee on EW,D.O.A

=)) ....... if thats the case then i start ma own crew..... =))

LOL drop sumtin join Street Legendz

hhmmm lol.

at what vertikill said. is doa really gonna oin street legends

what ye think legend? you think they quality enough for me... lol

^Yes,...try out for dynasty aswell

LOL drop sumtin join Street Legendz

i posted this to ye earlier.. no offence like but...

stop bein lame, Flame,Yer name should be mary-jane,Ye actim like a dame/
Whip ye wi a bamboo cane,mary-jane, ur fuckin insane/
cover ye in gasolene,watch as the flames turn green,thats somthin i'v nevr seen//
stop bein so fukin lame, you know ye got no game,you'l force me to take aim. then no more mary_flame.

thatw as wack..lol..funny..but wack do umake gfx

try out for artifact they will except anyone

^Accept...;)

oh ya lol.

thatw as wack..lol..funny..but wack do umake gfx


i try... doin graphic an poster design as part of ma art coarse..

show me foshizzle

.... wtf.... i have no idea what ye jus said

i try... doin graphic an poster design as part of ma art coarse..

you actually understoud what he had said

show me foshizzle

if you gonna say it say it right........... show me my shizzle

or my nizzle

lol....... thats u told.

lmao r u gonna do audio

am a shit....

lol what your a shit. lol i neva knew that. attack of the shits

ok...duh me , smartass....
No i fukin am not... am gona kill your cat...

bet i can make your cat bark..........
*covers it in petrol*
pussy goes wooof.......


hahah

lol than have a ghostrighter do your ongs and you perform them

thats jus fukin cheatin... if you neva wrote it dont spit it......

if you neva wrote it dont spit it......
A particular crew leader must read this,....lmao

*doesnt get figured out*

A particular crew leader must read this,....lmao

dont u agree

thats jus fukin cheatin... if you neva wrote it dont spit it......

when the check came i dont think you would give a fuk. lol

but when the freestyle challenge came from a rival, you would look like a dick who couldnt rap..

"do you want me" - Yes I do :D

i know...

lol hehe

she <3's me...

lol have anyone accepted you yet

uh no cos i said on page 3 or sumin that i suk

lol @ no-one wanting

I'm not surprised

even if they did i wouldnt join... i unlike some people, am not livin in a dream world... i know am shit...

^ That's good though, gives you room to elevate. I've only been writing a year anc actually rapping for a few months and I elevated pretty quickly, why? Because I knew I sucked and picked out certain things that I had to elevate on and looked into ADVACNED stuff myself.

cheers man...

i called legend out... he about my level... this should be intrestin...

you elevate by battling people better thats why i always battle sirius

join lyrically insane man