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soldier4eva69
10-14-2002, 01:22 PM
CAN'T ESCAPE ALL SUFFERING AND PAIN/
I JUST GOT SHUT OUT THE DOOR, TRAPPED IN THE FREEZING RAIN/
I FEEL HATED AND GREED INSIDE/
I NEVER SHOULD HAVE PASSED UP THE GOOD RIDE/
I WISH I COULD GO BACK TO THE PAST, CORRECT MY MISTAKES/
I DON'T CARE HOW MANY TIMES IT WOULD HAVE TO TAKE/
LIVING IN WHAT FEELS LIKE A BROKEN HOME/
BEING LEFT OUT IN THE WILDERNESS TO ROME/
I'M TOO AFRAID AND PROUD TO ASK FOR HELP AND ASSISTANCE/
ALWAYS CAUGHT UP WITH MY SELF, USING ALL MY RESISTANCE/
SUFFING.....DIEING......COLLAPSING/
MAKING MY WAY, THROUG HARDSHIP AND RAPPING/


PEACE

AllAboutMe
10-14-2002, 01:34 PM
hot hot shit, awesome verse, l really liked the flow on this spit and the rhymes were hot tight

soldier4eva69
10-14-2002, 02:21 PM
THANKS......KEEP IT REAL...PEACE

ObLiViOn
10-14-2002, 02:49 PM
this was real nice, flowed well. But i wanna see just a keystyle from you - try some punches and wordplay.

But flow-wise, this was real good. Content was nice too.

Overall a tight drop.

PZ>

FireN'Ice
10-14-2002, 02:55 PM
i dug it

MCD
10-14-2002, 05:06 PM
t'was coo'

kidjragon
10-14-2002, 11:36 PM
yeah man tight.. good job