[jragon]
Im like a sniper in washington scopin all the people,
I sit at night watchin em atop the church steeples,
Like batman in gotham, Im the robin gone evil,
Sudame and his Laden, Im stoppin all the lethals//
You look in the lights see me runnin from the cops,
Ima crook in the night pullin out all the stops,
Ill book ya in a fight and hit ya in the spot,
Ill hook ya like a bull dog bite and smoke all ya pot.//
Smoke rises from the clip I just emptied in ya chest,
The snipe spys up from the shit I rapped cause im blessed,
Cant lie cause you flinched from my fist that I carress,
All your trys is whack shit cause Im not even throwin my best.//

[vertisyle]
Im thuggin nightly with this 45 and this bag of weed,
I see you huggin tightly to your nine and that sack of seeds,
I suggest highly that you try to lay off this steez,
Cuz my sights are gettin sightly and I might just shoot ya ease...//

[collar bone]
This is the real deal today, Im not gonna give it up when I can hit,
I feel good this way, I cant get rid of everthing that I get,//
I do the verse for thuggin with Jragon cause I feel like rappin,
I curse at the gangstas taggin cause they spit like cunt lappin,//
So what if im mexican, tryin to say I cant collaborate?
I got two restless hands, they workin hard so are ya up to date?//
My boy kid is snipin you out with Vertistyle so are you feelin?
He'll get rid of you muh fuckers now, gotta get back to drug dealin.//
Im rappin this like I wrap a joint so I can go home,
Im flappin these gums to get to the point says colla bone...//

[vertisyle]
Im thuggin nightly with this 45 and this bag of weed,
I see you huggin tightly to your nine and that sack of seeds,
I suggest highly that you try to lay off this steez,
Cuz my sights are gettin sightly and I might just shoot ya ease...//

that was a collab i did today, i need someone to mix or master that for me and if you want do a verse of your own and ill put it on the album im workin on. i cant make a good enough beat for it so i need some help, thanks. holla.

had trouble feeling the flow, maybe its cuz i dont know how it goes but good work.

i liked when you used batman and robin in a line, thats cool.

thanks... that was a rush collab but oh well. the flow is easy.. rhyme the middle and last words (well close to that) like washington and watching em, then people and steeples.. goes like that the whole time in my flow. i needa beat so its easier and i can audio. oh well.. im out.

dont worry about the rhymes, there not always the most important pieces to the puzzle, when you look at say eminem's lyrics , its not always basic rhymes at the end of each line, he mixes it up and doesnt always make every line rhyme , as long as it goes good in the song and the flow of the song, thats whats important. peace.

Yo im good at doing that shit
holla at me on AOL at Mr Stuntastic06 and i can do the shit for u for free

i had a hard time feeling this...it maybe because i'm tired....but peace

i dont do beats but i mix/master....get a beat from mp3.com and we can sort something out if you want

i had a hard to figurin out da flow but other than that it was good.