ObLiViOn
10-10-2002, 07:17 PM
Just a drop. I like it.
Over a JC Beats, er, beat....
"Omen Battle Diss"
Just needed someone to diss. Tha beef (as one sided as it was) is over now in my opinion - can't be fucked.
Please peep and i'll return favour.
www.soundclick.com/Oblivion
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*edited 'cos i'm a dumbass who forgot to post a link*
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Mr. Meyahgee
10-10-2002, 08:13 PM
imma kick soundclick in the balls,..it aint showing up
ObLiViOn
10-10-2002, 08:43 PM
lol
I'll hold its legs open so you can kick real hard man.
Thanks for trying ta peep it
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emcee1
10-10-2002, 09:30 PM
this beat is sick!....flow/delivery/lyrics is good......your vocals have a dull feel to them though and i can't put my finger on what it is.....what sort of a process do you put 'em through??...maybe a small reverb or some overdubs would do the trick..
-NinjaMic-
10-10-2002, 09:32 PM
Oh... epic build up on this beat. Damn you sound mean as hell on this... your style reminds me of this kid named NastyRhymez, but he's a faggot. NastyRhymez's homsexuality aside, this was kinda tight... cadence couldda been better, but lyrics were coo.
Mr. Meyahgee
10-10-2002, 09:33 PM
nice!
you improved a shit load's,..
like the rhyming and flow was hott.
beat is ill,. kinda dark,..always good..
delivery is getting better man..
rode the beat well
i think this is your best so far imo
nice uppin fo ya :D
ObLiViOn
10-10-2002, 09:39 PM
thanks one and all.
I don't put reverb on them. tho' i may know!!!!
Thanks for tha feedback.
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Uppin'
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i listened to it this morning while i waS getting ready for college so in didnt get the FULL impact of it..thought it was tight though..definitely your best audio.
the porridge line was ill..the way you delivered it..it came off really well.
I think the killa B beef is a little dead now though!..thanks for the shoutout at the end! peaceeee!
Exodus
10-11-2002, 02:23 PM
nice style, though the flow did stumble here and there still did a nice job with this song, nice punches, better delivey than the last time i heard you, i actually heard some emotion behind your bars
nice drop
ObLiViOn
10-12-2002, 09:55 AM
thanks for tha feedback.
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T1 Req
10-13-2002, 03:39 PM
Pretty dope. Your delivery was sort of lighthearted over the dark beat though. A Takeover style beat would have complemented the lyrics perfectly. Good flow in general, although in places the slow tempo got to you...
ObLiViOn
10-13-2002, 05:06 PM
thanks all.
Ex: i know i gotta get emotion!!!
thanks
Req: yeah, damn that fiendish slow beat.
thanks a lot for all tha feedback.
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