this started out a poem then sort of changed it's very well here I go

Ican feel it in my heart/ the way you look at me
you can't blind fold these feelings/ so sorry

you try to fight the love/ thats oozing through your soul/
but you'll never get rid of me/ hee hee hee ho ho

my love is like fire burning in your brain/
you wish you could leave me/ I know it's drivin you insane
theres no denying the electrisity
I can feel it in my blood/ coming to seduce my every party

Don't deny your love to me/ lifes to short to suffocate that tree
I know you try....
to resist my charm/ but it will never happen
I am your personal alarm

Life without you talking to me / is like hot chocolate
with shit loads of coffee
it makes you burn yurn for that feelin inside
but I'm sorry
I can't be your fantasy for life

don't deny your love to me/ lifes to short
to suffocate that tree
I know you try...
to resist my charm/ but it will never happen
I am your personal alarm

Time will pass by without much thought/
then you'll hear from me oneday/ and then you'll be caught
in my web- of love
god how long/ it has taken me forever
to get you to be free.......
FOR ME :o

Wow,..that's really good.....keep up the good work:)

thanks heaps it accually is about something very personal for me. cheers

It took me afew reads to get into it, and "get it" but it might have been cause i was tired lol. Now i've read it again i like it, good job.

cheers Jade, I know it is a bit hard to follow for me too but same as you said read it a bit then u get the flow. thanks for your input cause what you have said is exactly true, it isn't one that peeps who don't generally read poetry would beable to read easily