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50 years ago
01-23-2006, 09:10 PM
Looking for a better way seems inconsequential
Yet I'm fighting myself to hit my top potential
To the people that fell, anger is a place to dwell
Yet in my mind's eye, using contempt is chasing Hell
Perfection is impossible to reach, not rational to question
The best do not survive, so stop the lies of natural selection
My own percieved rightousness leaves me fighting this
Don't I attempt my best to give peace when reciting scripts?
Ancient ways of life persuade me to show compassion to others
Yet I feel drawn to discriminate against rehashin with lovers
This bitterness is killing me, Satan tells me to hold grudges
The works of good that I hold to compell me to show love with
All those who oppose you are human, not demonic or evil
So I must remember to show love to scrubs or popular people
So I pray that the Lord blesses me, through testing me
So if I must be an extremist, it's because I love exessively
You can't change those you love with coercion or telepathy
Nor with hate or anger, love is what changes us mentally
So if we've become enemies, please know that I'll never leave
They mean just as much to me, as my own memories

DeA†h
01-23-2006, 10:30 PM
mmm,....very nice....9/10

Saoirse
01-24-2006, 07:20 AM
Nice:D:)
To the people that fell, anger is a place to dwell

50 years ago
01-24-2006, 12:12 PM
Thank you so much...this kind of sums up my feelings about forgiveness and acceptance btw.

ObLiViOn
01-24-2006, 03:28 PM
this is very hot mate... nice imagery etc i'm not gonna go all technical into it lol but you always bring dope lyrics in poetry or rap

nice work man

50 years ago
01-24-2006, 04:16 PM
Oblizzle! Thanks ninja.

Laayla
01-24-2006, 10:14 PM
I liked it. Of course, it's written real well. The start is super.

Jon Bon Jovi
01-31-2006, 04:34 PM
Yeah, as hot as fire.

Jenuine
02-01-2006, 01:10 PM
Good Job, Josh.

chelsy
02-02-2006, 12:03 PM
yer my rap idol mate! really!
i love you josh..
wish it was reciprocated...:(

50 years ago
02-03-2006, 12:00 AM
Aww, that's sweet. Thanks for the compliments.

lol I'm nothing special, just a messed up poet.Don't worry.:)