View Full Version : The World Can Be Yours


Shady Makaveli
06-16-2002, 11:02 PM
I started worse than you can imagine. Negative infinty/
Ain't exageratin' I'm an outcast. Ain't nobody into me/
But through various avenues I found the clues/
Which includes how to rule the world if you choose/
First off pay your dues, and be constantly on the move/
Put your all your soul into whatever you love to do/
And you can't loose "Overtime" you can be iller than flus/
It'll take hard work and "blues" but soon you'll be whose making the rules/
Perfect your craft and you'll be loved, respected, and.../
Affective able to be selective with the hand.../
You're dealt in life, you'll have fans, and be "felt" for life/
No longer be pelted with strife, have bodyguards to protect your life/
You can crawl outta the "darkness" and "rags" and be "dressed" in "ever-present light"/
And at your height you can almost see God's pressence and angel's essence in flight/
But here's a lesson I figure you must learn now (learn now)/
The brighter your light shines the quicker it'll burn out (burn out)/
And once you lose your shine, it's "goodbye" and you'll be turn down/
You're spurned now, replaces by younger ones who yearn now/
"Return how?" Very few can, the world is rarely in the hands of an old man/
"Oh damn" Yeah I know it's cold man, but you gotta know man/
Basically you gotta make your mark and leave as soon as your power recedes/
To recieve "legend" status, otherwise you'll grieve once you leave/
Believe in yourself and you can achieve, and have all you see/
Be in league with prestiege, and weave dreams into your realities/
If your heart is your source, you can set your own course/
Be a reconed force, and scorch your competition like a torch/
If you have respect, honor, and remorce/
The world and everything in it can be yours/

(might add more later)

MC TeK5
06-17-2002, 03:03 AM
this was overall pretty nice... nuttin spectacular... but given that right beat it could be nice..
kinda reminded me of Nas a lil..
kep up tha good werk
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Creep
06-17-2002, 06:54 AM
lol @ the nas comment... "the world is yours" hmm, where'd i hear that before ;)

and a tip: stay off rhyming the same word twice.. it doesn't look very nice, so try not to. other than that, it was okay. nothing special but if you keep practicing you'll get waay better. trust me

Shady Makaveli
06-18-2002, 05:28 PM
practicing you'll get waay better


:D I love compliments like this... Anyway uppin'

ObLiViOn
06-18-2002, 06:17 PM
Yeah - basically what Tek said (<< listen to this dood)

Nas-y, but that ain't bad now is it? Now - if you were like Shorty..... (the demons!!!)

Never mind about that ^^^

Yeah, but really keep practising and it'll go BAM and there ya have it

PZ>

SLEEPERS+PERISH

PZ>

Phrantic
06-19-2002, 11:26 AM
somehow i felt this cause its got a somewhat excellent flow and some nice combos & vocab in it
not very spectacular word, but this is one of those lyrics that would sound tight in audio, so record that piece of smelly shit