View Full Version : you are dead.............


EcHo
01-17-2006, 07:44 AM
Do you ever think
Do you even have any clue
All the pain you caused me
All the shit you put me through
Made me feel like i was nothing
Tryin to control my life
To keep me under your thumb

Look at me now i am moving on
i have all but forgotten you
Something tells me you'll remember me forever
when many years have passed
And you dwell on this
i am happy now
You will never ruin this for me
i've met someone you will never compare to
no matter how hard you try
everything you did to me
made me stronger
everything you said made me see
do your worst, say what you want
you, your life and everything you said
are now completely dead to me

EcHo
01-17-2006, 07:45 AM
not my best but i needed to get it out>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Jon Bon Jovi
01-17-2006, 08:23 AM
I like it. Relatable and just good :)

MCD
01-17-2006, 08:59 AM
Yeah pretty good....too basic though.

EcHo
01-18-2006, 09:50 AM
Thanx for the props and the critiscism..................Much Respect>>>>>>>>>>>>

queen2005
01-18-2006, 02:06 PM
yeah like you said not one of your best but i know the feeling when you need to get shit out or when you need to just get your feelings out and put them on to paper. its emotional i like it but yeah....much peace +peace+

EcHo
01-19-2006, 05:46 AM
thanx..........nice to hear from you again>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

queen2005
01-19-2006, 07:44 AM
^ yeah nice to hear from you to pleased to read some of your poems again. +peace+ peace

DeA†h
01-19-2006, 08:47 AM
It's not THAT dead

Saoirse
01-19-2006, 09:59 AM
^ ha?? who's not THAT dead?

Good poem

DeA†h
01-19-2006, 10:02 AM
^The poem

EcHo
01-21-2006, 03:01 PM
^^ hahaha...........thanks dude>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Laayla
01-21-2006, 05:53 PM
I liked it. Mad props.

EcHo
01-22-2006, 06:59 PM
I liked it. Mad props.

Much Respect........thanx for the props>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>