So this is Exodus, the genesis for the young and rest-less..
ya shit sounds like fruity pebbles pourin on ya girls testicles.//
And just-becuz, I aint a rich boy gangsta with diamond deposits,
I cant flow hits like an eminem "cleanin out my closet".//
I just bought it, the time to realize your next in line,
for the illest thrash out in the history of these battle rhymes.//
Like a cattle line, whats holdin me back is the electrical fencing,
the pain Ill inflict is wincing, like blood on your sheets its drenching//
These words are offending, so grab some popcorn and listen up,
cuz your shits messin up like the shit on ya lips blisterin up.//
Its sizzlin up, but its straight from the STDs ya get from ya mate,
maybe thats why you straddle ya pants and spread them legs
cuz ya bitch is crazed, with herpes from fuckin everyone but u late//
Thats right and now you need x-rayed, you got nothin on this,
my disses for you are like pullin a toothe while eatin outta bitch.
You just stop and replay these bits, cuz I rip illa shit then DJ Flip//
All I hear is gurgle when you spit, sounds like ya chokin on ya lyrics,
all I hear is constant bull-ragging sounding like you want team spirit,
But its ill when I hear it, ill as in sick so get up and fear this.//
Dont tear bitch, Im not pullin out my aks, glocks and uzis,
Im chillin in a jacuzzi with hos that get off with their pussies oozing,
and Im still flowin these flows with confidence your losing.//
What, ya tubing? Give it up Ex, yall never get a victory on Kid,
thats just a gimmick that gets rid of punk ass biggs,
who thrash out like i do on the neighborhood kids.//
I close ya lid, shut ya mouth cuz were sick of the smell-odor,
you produced it with ya bull shit is like thomas family wine but older,
I been sober, kept my shoulders straight like a soldier.//
But you let it smolder, your disses that is, but whos trackin,
you just got ripped, rest in peace, signed kid jragon...

there ya go, 30 lines even and nice flow ex. my best flows are battle or collabs... but thats my opinion. your up ;)

lmao kid i already had a thread with my verse in it whyd you make this?

I thought I’d use the mic to slay and just to prove ya kinda gay,
but you did it, showing bitches never refuse their right of way/
Now ya bruised by rhymes I say, exposing that ya meant to lose,
cuz you have no chance of success like homeless cats in interviews/
Ya left confused & wondering, why ya coming in with blunders if,
you’re Vinyl’s torn asunder since you’re level’s under this/
My puns are sick and come equipped to make you suffer bodyblows,
I’ll crush ya choppy flows and pause them just like buffered audios/
To show you copy prose, and prolly pose as though you can survive,
meanwhile your fast demise is advertised through wack-ass alibis/
You’re sacrificed for spitting average lies that’s inappropriate,
cause you’re verbs burn at the lowest degree like an Associates/
And as you know my flow is sick, you try to spitbox rounds with me,
boasting that you ‘found the keys’ ya posts still get locked down with ease/
I’ll clown ya steez…as profound decrees’ll pound & beat you senseless,
the applause’ll seem relentless when your sound defeat commences/
Cuz you found ya cheap defenses, yet they’re just so weak a resource,
they get you wet up more than cats in submarines with screen doors/
Your recourse is to be shady, since I’m set to wreck you slut,
cause if you’re ballsy or just crazy, still my scripts’ll sever nuts/
Ya neck is cut with no remorse, this battle’s just a show of force,
as I’m the type to slit ya throat then choke you with ya Vocal chords/
While holding swords, to damage you until the opened voting’s stopped,
you’d only stand a chance changing my rhymes in Adobe Photoshop/

goddamn my new steez is ill

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my bad ex.. lol. *smacks his hand* wont happen again :P

anyway yeah people votes!

Kid jragon -

must admit, not really impressed with this verse. No personals to really speak of and it was all pretty standard.

Basic insults - flowed well but i'm sure he can do much better.

All I hear is gurgle when you spit, sounds like ya chokin on ya lyrics ^^ was tha only line which really stood out for me

Score -----> 10/20

Exodus:

boasting that you ‘found the keys’ ya posts still get locked down with ease/ ^^ that was alright, tha keys and locked down bit
they get you wet up more than cats in submarines with screen doors/ ^^ lol
you’d only stand a chance changing my rhymes in Adobe Photoshop/ ^^nice

This flowed excellently - your new steez is ill but still not a plethora of punches or quoteables.

Still, tha much better verse.

Score -----> 16/20

no beefs

PZ>

Waiting on tha other judges

PZ>

votes would be nice

UPPIN

Calling on tha other judges ta peep.

PZ>

UPPIN'

PZ>

blah... uhhh someone a lil help here? votes maybe?

ight i know ths aint a tournmnt battle at all

but ne ways

kidjragon
so so on flow,..okay on meta's, wordplay not a whole lot
there' on quoteable

"Its sizzlin up, but its straight from the STDs ya get from ya mate,
maybe thats why you straddle ya pants and spread them legs"

nice rhyming on that one

exodus

nice flow,..
good rhyming
nice punchlines
dope overall imo

"Ya neck is cut with no remorse, this battle’s just a show of force,
as I’m the type to slit ya throat then choke you with ya Vocal chords/"

nice flow, like the wordplay


vote exodus

i'll give kidjragon this one, good shit by both

you'll need it after the stomping i give you, lol

lmmfao I'm not even gonna say anything bout this vote

i just noticed that too, why you make this a 'round 1' thread??

Originally posted by AllAboutMe
i'll give kidjragon this one, good shit by both

you'll need it after the stomping i give you, lol

wtf??? lmao!!

Yeah Exodus conntinues to impress me with clever rhymes, good multis, a hot punch here and there, score 8.5/10

Kid jragon is still just a bit better than average, your not whack, but not exactl tight either. Your rhymes are unclever, and you say word over and over ex. "thrash out" "ill". But you ain't so bad, Ex is one of the best, score 5.5-6/10

kidj isn't bad, Exodus came with his usual goodness. Overall there isn't a difference in initial glance and the pure "looks" of the verse, but this was really decided by wordplay, technical rhymes, and punchlines. kidj kind of dabbled, dissed a little, but Ex brought all three from beginning to end.

Vote = Exodus

thanks for votes people, like i said i get better by going against people better, good job Ex.

My fav. line from Ex's flow was

"While holding swords, to damage you until the opened voting’s stopped,
you’d only stand a chance changing my rhymes in Adobe Photoshop/"

buts its all good. now gimme some votes on my other battle with AAM! lol thanks yall, peaz.

exodus rhyme read a lot easily..... and he seemed 2 cum harder in certain areas... jragon kid had nuttin spectacular.. just a lotta disses.. but ex came with tha wordplay...

lmao @ how similar that "no remorse" , "vocal cords" shit is to something I wrote

great minds think alike?

:D @ raped your mother's mouth with a posterboard