9-16 bars (if you go ove by one or 2 it's okay 3 you dq'ed)
must mention oppent's name,..
NO RIDING OFF A VERSE
due on friday 11:59 p.m
NO EXTENDED DATE'S AT ALL.
iight come out swingin'
peace

aiyo focus, ima leave u dried up and shrivled like a locust/
his win is like a magic trick, all i gotta do is say hocus pocus/
and boom, i advance and your left wit a wet spot in your pants/
u this u gunna win this in the "long" run, not a short chance/
make your whore dance, wiggle her pants like shakira/
but when u find out its your mom, yo u gunna fear her/
i can sens the win comin alot nearer, very fastly approaching/
your fastly choking, your life's almost done, give in your last emotions/
cuz its round two and its no problem to pound you/
to the ground you go left your nose red and exposed thats why i say i "clowned" you/
u cant do nothing bout your pain like your in japenese tourtue/
compared to me u aint dickless, it just so happens its shorter/
thats the truth, now that i said, what are you left with/
a death wish cuz you a loser and no choice but to accept it/


aight there it is good luck

Uppin'

Waiting on Focus ta drop his verse.

You got 24 hours 31 mins by my watch....

PZ>

UPPIN'

PZ>

i'm a "flaten" you quicker than "kash" made on a "money press"
made u what u've becum; but ur wackness still hasn't suppressed
even though i "tought ya."; this "My Son" is a one sided contest//
me' lyrically molestin u, worse than u "Beat" urself on a daily basis
seen that "look" u've stared at me wit, kash you "crave~this?"
or is it that, i'm a britle your bones; an ya undeniably "hate~this?"
wait. its tha "truth"; I get ur "bitches" & leave ya home "dateless"
uh uh... ur hatin' cuz u know; any who votes fer you is tasteless
buh, still- i wouldn't be "below you" if u were "totally weightless"//
let's get personal; tha reason u miss d12 board, cuz u got rode son!
u had "boppers rydin", an "helpin" ya like you were their luved one
now there it is,*BANG* tha sound of that metaphoric ego rippin gun//
ur ego's droped "13" points cuz i told it like it was; on bar "1" thru "12"
you've seen ma "11" minimal thoughts, now i'm out, ta leave u ta dwel
sit an realize, ur not in ma league; i'm heaven an ur sum wanna b hell//

~eZ~

***Edited Fer Spelling-- bad typin Mistakes->LOL... As usual! :D***

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Kash11:

"long" run, not a short chance - that was aiight

cuz its round two and its no problem to pound you/
to the ground you go left your nose red and exposed thats why i say i "clowned" you/
^prolly ya best line. Nice in all areas

Ya flowed well, nice vocab and content. Overall pretty good.

15/20

Focus:

i'm a "flaten" you quicker than "kash" made on a "money press"
^^ dope as fuck opener

me' lyrically molestin u, worse than u "Beat" urself on a daily basis
^tight

i wouldn't be "below you" if u were "totally weightless"//
^^nice

ur ego's droped "13" points cuz i told it like it was; on bar "1" thru "12"
^^nice, almost Nas-like

Flowed real well and vocab and content were real good.

18/20

So, with no beefs, i vote for Focus

PZ>

nice

kash

you have a nice flow.
good rhyming, but that hocus pocus is a lil played with focus
some nice lies here

"u this u gunna win this in the "long" run, not a short chance/"

and

"u cant do nothing bout your pain like your in japenese tourtue/
compared to me u aint dickless, it just so happens its shorter/"

that one sow's your ryming level.. nice man

good job 3/5

focus

as ob said nice opener..
flow was good
rhyming alright
punchline were dope

"i'm a "flaten" you quicker than "kash" made on a "money press""

"let's get personal; tha reason u miss d12 board, cuz u got rode son!"

nice personal,..cuz it's on sig,..nice


"ur ego's droped "13" points cuz i told it like it was; on bar "1" thru "12""

i think that one toped it...

nice battle you too..
but i vote for FOCUS...

i liked his punchlines a bit mor,. kash you done well. prop's to ya

nice goin on... :D nice battle kash man str8 up--

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