9-16 bars (if you go ove by one or 2 it's okay 3 you dq'ed)
must mention oppent's name,..
NO RIDING OFF A VERSE
due on friday 11:59 p.m
NO EXTENDED DATE'S AT ALL.
iight come out swingin'
peace

Didn't even realize this thread was here... Aiight, checked in.

lookin forward ta this battle... str8 up

eh, yo.. ninja hit me up kid

Checked in

ya style's a loaner, please return it to it's original owner
you wardrobe is limited, but I'll help you slip into a coma
kid is a roamer, & I'm bound to mark ya wit harsh hands
'cuz getting bayou is far easier than leasing marshlands
doesn't like sex? kid's gay & Im concerned with him now
Ninja isn't even 'about face' sorta like not turnin around
Burnin enshrouds...or be gored from swords apparently
beating Omen? nobody 'counsel-out' like 'outdoor therapy'
this whore's preparin me for a win...I'm pouncin this slut
he doesnt deserve any props unless ya countin a crutch
ya amountin to dust, he's crushed...his lungs collapse in
he wants a W too, um, won't get it til he does his taxes
I'm defeatin this queer..quick and straight kickin his ass
ya just saw a 'former modern' a win like it was the past

*Edited For Spelling*

yo God - believe it, I made an Omen//I'm the Father of Jesus
Omen got about as many "punches"... as a quadrapalegic
he's far from collegiate,,, and he's in a lonely place
while I do shit with bitches that's nastier than Omens face
you ain't got no style, or diction - no Rhymes, or rythm...
I beat you like a stepchild... like red headed Irish children//
it's MY addiction, to spit rhymes with hypehns in 'em
that homage the Kama Sutra and fuck you up in 5 positions
covered in fine incisions, with precision from head to toe,
while it's YOUR addiction... to sing back up for L F O
Oh Hell Eff-- No... you must have caught it from drugs
'cause the only thing ill about you is HIV positive blood...
(damn...)... a hyperactive cardiologist couldn't catch yo timin
Delivery sound like sign language crossed with pantomimin.
sound like you got a lisp, a cleff lip and your jaw is swollin'
or is it that I got you shook?... like you saw an Omen

damn, gonna be a good one for the judges, i thought both were pretty decent, Ninja with his usual hard hittin punches and omen with some dope metas, i'm leavin this one to the pros but just gotta say good battle.

Damn madd battle.

OMEN:
you wardrobe is limited, but I'll help you slip into a coma ^^ nice as hell

beating Omen? nobody 'counsel-out' like 'outdoor therapy' ^^that was aiight

he doesnt deserve any props unless ya countin a crutch ^^ ill as hell

OVERALL:- Flow - ill as hell. Lyrics/Content - real nice. Wordplay - tight.

Score --------> 17/20

NINJA-MIC:
Omen got about as many "punches"... as a quadrapalegic ^^ tight

you ain't got no style, or diction - no Rhymes, or rythm...
I beat you like a stepchild... like red headed Irish children// ^^ funny as hell and it flowed perfectly

that homage the Kama Sutra and fuck you up in 5 positions ^^that was ill

'cause the only thing ill about you is HIV positive blood... ^^ erm, nice as always but his can get a little played.. lol

a hyperactive cardiologist couldn't catch yo timin ^^dope

OVERALL:- Flow - perfect, lyrics/content - as good as omens if not a little better, wordplay - nice as hell

Score -------> 18/20 at least

So, needless to say i vote for Ninja Mic .

PZ>

Waiting on tha other judges

PZ>

damn nice battle yoy two

omen

"you wardrobe is limited, but I'll help you slip into a coma"

nice line as ob said


"ya just saw a 'former modern' a win like it was the past"

that was dope as hell yo end with..

flow was hot,.. goos meta's punchlines werent as hard thou..
good rhyming and bar structure

16.5/20

ninja mic

"Omen got about as many "punches"... as a quadrapalegic"
aigian as ob said before dope punchline

"or is it that I got you shook?... like you saw an Omen"
nice use of name / personal on this like the way it ended

nice had a ill flow, good vocab.. punchlines/disses were dope as fuck,..came clean on it..

overall it's a 18/20

vote ninja

felt he came much harder wih more direct disses then beating around the bush..

dope battle guys,..congrad's to ninja

and props to omen

dope battle.....

most of the quoteables have been mentioned but the line about bayou by omen and the delivery like sign language line by ninja were slept on :(
im going to have to vote for ninja .....omens verse just had too much filler in it IMO

oOoOo Omen got burned...i notice he just uses punch after punch..i bet his battle verses are all recycled keystyles

lol.

It was relatively close tho' man.

PZ>

Originally posted by []v[]CD
oOoOo Omen got burned...i notice he just uses punch after punch..i bet his battle verses are all recycled keystyles

Didn't I already beat you?

Ninja-Mic is through ta tha next round.

Congratulations.

And, as Helm said, props ta Omen for making this a good battle.

PZ>

Originally posted by ~Omen~


Didn't I already beat you?

indeed..but the fact is i used factual disses against you..go check out the verses...
..nearly every line you posted against me was just a punch..i don't consider this as skillfull as actually bein real about the person you're dissing..

,,and you just got burned:D