DISS TO CHASE #2


I come with free wording while you be burdened with
Whack rhymes leave cataracts in your spine my skills swift
I do work you just a true jerk why your brew don’t perk
Like coffee? Type softy with no talent why you won’t insert
Flavor in your junk? Just a hardcore punk try ignore this chump
My rhymes burn with stress and turn into flesh you just
A worm no nest why you concerned about breasts? Fuss
Want a perm and a dress my script sick while you wear
Lip stick , you think freaky and drink deeply while uniquely
Wanting to be female so you can be nailed with cock completely
While sweetly wearing make as a fake butt you softer than cotton
Why offer a rotten verse? You at the bottom first class with a hot ton
Whacko rhymes, wanna stay good and say you hood have on
A phony bandana hell you not Tony Montana bitch you not
SCARFACE and a far race from that you itch for a new plot
Like a ship I sail deep but you a failed freak can’t float like
A boat on water, rope round throat and choke some flavor right
Out this dude, you fight first just to bite verse I’ll write a label
On your forehead saying “I’M TWISTED CHASE A DISGRACE
TO RAP” let me arrange your strange retirement from this place
Serve some cookies and milk this rookie in silk too soft and
Crew false

I assume it's a XIII diss

No, otherwise he woulda said "X this" and "X that", cause he doesn't understand that it actually means something.

^Maybe he's scared to mention yer name?

Probably...fuckin punk...

X just say the word and i'll rip your ass

damn!!!!! glad is sayin this staight up x

Then do it. "The word".

How many times do we have to tell you? Proper grammer. You sound like a robot.


Me think you still have lot to learn. *beeps* Dont end you line, the middle of sentences.

Dont end the line right in the middle of a sentence it throws off the flow. Example:

Listen when you break your bars/
like this it makes people see stars//
It makes them wanna take jet cars/
far away to space and then to mars//

or

Listen when you break your bars like this it makes people see stars/
It makes them wanna take jet cars far away to space and then to mars//

!st one has a broken flow with a beat in the middle of the sentence(becuase it takes time to move your eyes down to the next bar.)

kayjay that's my style let the reader find the flow

If you dont drop something IllProdigy I'll count your no show as a win. I dont like doing that, because sometimes I wonder whether they just couldnt respond in time. Your just being a pussy, you responded twice in the thread without dropping, and its not like your too busy to get on here and drop disses.

Step your game up..

kayhjay where do i respond i saw nothing at all

wtf you talking about?

^lol,...ye'

com eon man where do i respond and what site is the post on?

dude what in gods name are you talking about?