Recruit me and you'll see that im the best to be on anyones crew/
the last cowards who beefed wit me had nothin to do........so they flew/
cuz when bitches here my name.... Big J none of em got shit ta say/
and those cowards that fled, blead from the head/
and i didnt have use a gat.. i used words instead/

Holla at me, im new at this shit so i got plenty more if ya like it

This is not enough........spit a tight 6-7 bars

yo, spit some more and i'll think about it

Yo momma eatz chicken nuggetz yo.

















WTF?!?!?!























KEWL?!?! ASL? n0000000b

It didn't impress enough.
Spit more and maybe I can think again...

kewl kewl kewl...





...does the J stand for 'Joke'? Seriously?

nah..i'll pass.

You Cannot Sit Still, Its Like Trying To Play With Your Balls And Go To Church.

That's not really enough to make a decision with, you need to drop somthing longer Big J.

Recruit me and you'll see that im the best to be on anyones crew/
the last cowards who beefed wit me had nothin to do........so they flew/

1st line should say in anyones crew. 2nd line needs to be re-worded. We already know they are cowards if they flew so you can take that out. Get rid of the '.....' if throws off the flow.


cuz when bitches here my name.... Big J none of em got shit ta say/
and those cowards that fled, blead from the head/

"Say and "head" dont rhymes at all. Agian get rid of '....' throws off the flow. 2nd line needs help other than it doesnt rhyme. If they fled how did they bleed from the head? Did you run after them? Explain how, then maybe it will be the same lenght as the 1st line and will have flow.


and i didnt have use a gat.. i used words instead/

Missing a word here. Its "to" Its an ok line. But it needs to be longer. You need to throw some vocab in your spits man.



Hope this helps +peace+

didnt impress me one bit sorry man

Recruit me and you'll see that im the best to be on anyones crew/
the last cowards who beefed wit me had nothin to do........so they flew/

1st line should say in anyones crew. 2nd line needs to be re-worded. We already know they are cowards if they flew so you can take that out. Get rid of the '.....' if throws off the flow.


cuz when bitches here my name.... Big J none of em got shit ta say/
and those cowards that fled, blead from the head/

"Say and "head" dont rhymes at all. Agian get rid of '....' throws off the flow. 2nd line needs help other than it doesnt rhyme. If they fled how did they bleed from the head? Did you run after them? Explain how, then maybe it will be the same lenght as the 1st line and will have flow.


and i didnt have use a gat.. i used words instead/

Missing a word here. Its "to" Its an ok line. But it needs to be longer. You need to throw some vocab in your spits man.



Hope this helps +peace+



aight thanx fo the tips and fuk man im new at this shit so jus wait awhile cuz ill probly get betta but thanx homie

^Yes,u might get better but that time the world is gonna' end

The world will end with boiling seas.

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