Illprodigy screaming "I'm a Newby!", now he's just another wanna be groupie /
MC gunna mix you like a slurpy KAL's words will make you all tired and droopy //*1

You knew he would rip you apart but right now its too late no reason for EZP to wait /*2
You irritate me, I'll have to eradicate you, create a meal call it Ill served on a plate //

There must be a pussy disease going through artifact, came from sharke now its on to you /*3
It must because you’re a dyke times two, the only way you be Ill is for you to have the flue //

You have no flow like a car skipping from missing sparks, you bars must need to be lubricated /*4
Both of your brains miscalculated when you created the beef so now your getting terminated //

Sirius Black smothered you with his eyes closed just another walk in the park /
Making your eyes see the dark, when he hit the bulls eyes right on the mark //

Bitch ass Bash'em I'm gunna slash'em and thrash'em do it all before he blinks in flash /
Like the grass I burn you'll be cremated to ash and put where you belong in the trash //

Creflodollar took his rhymes and tied them to a piece of wood, then used it as hammer /*5
He bashed you with his rhymes, we dont hear a word from you like you in the slammer //*6

I feel bad for sharke, he tries to elevate and he has, but his crew pulls him down like an anchor /
I think he should just give up on them, or he should find some new group that wont be sinker //

*1: Thug mixs all the KAL audios
*2: He was a no show vs EZP
*3: sharke used to not battle anyone but now he does
*4: when a cars spark plugs are bad or loose the car can skip, skipping=no flow. when you lubricate something it gives less friction so therfore more flow. Bars as in / and //
*5: In bash'ems sig it has the devil with a hammer
*6: when I wrote this bash'em haddnt responded to any of the disses and when your in the slammer you cant really talk to the outside world.

Good personals,man........7.9/10

Nice personals, we actually know who you dissed (none of their 'can of two oranges' or calling XIII X... his names supposed to be 13 in roman numerals Bash, you get it now?...) you targeted Ill and Bash directly, but you had some good shots at Artifact too, this was a nice diss. 7/10

Thanks guys

XIII X... his names supposed to be 13 in roman numerals

First person to get it.

yeah good disses but work on the flow i think but yeah it wasnt too bad

shit not bad i dug it like the personal hits good shit man

yeah good disses but work on the flow i think but yeah it wasnt too bad

Flow? Look at the lines they are all almost the same lenght:eek:

^The lines are a lil' too long,so that cuts the flow a lil' bit.......try re-wording yer punches

who in kal or pir wrote that for you

I wrote it bitch and I have the paper to prove it.

Flow? Look at the lines they are all almost the same lenght:eek:
i meant the lines were a little too long for it to flow as well as it could have done.......but it was still a good rhyme,keep it up +peace+

lines a bit streched in places i thort,but think it was pretty tight 8/10
keep writing

i would give it a 5/10 not your best kayjay but it was good