Thank you for what you've done with yourself now I dont have to care
About you and I'll add one more mystery to this relationship that is not fiar
I'll say 'Thank You' but you wont know why and you'll wonder why I said 'Thank You'
You wont tell me why you broke up with me so now I have a secret to keep too
But I have to let it out so I'll tell these people why I no longer care
I cant stand goth, I'm sorry but black lipstick and black eye lids and black nails I cant bare
No more "Dam she's fine I miss her I want here as my girlfriend" so now its "Dam your ugly I dont want you as a girlfriend"
My love for you deep in my heart will always be there, but unless you turn back I'll never be attracted to you agian
To all the people who say looks dont matter, I'm sorry I'm just being me
I cant change it I dont 'Want You' anymore to me your nolonger sexy
But once agian you've hurt me and like all the other times you dont know it cuases anger
Your unaware becuase you've gone from my friend to my girlfriend back to my friend and then a total stranger
This time you've hurt me becuase now......I don't know why it just does
Maybe it's becuase now I know we wont go back to the way it was
I hide my true feelings with laughter, my friends and I laugh at how you change
Your boyfriend says he doesnt care but fuck him! he's gay! hes not in your range
You can get something better I did everything right with you I know I did
Walked you home, called you, walked to class, got your birthday presnt on time, and I even got along with your brother, you said he looked up to me like a big brother.
The poem I'm going to right about you will be 100 pages long to write down everything that happened and all the emotions I have and the questions I want answered.

Aren't the lines too stretched a lil' bit?

meh yeah but its poetry so...

yeah..good..
like it:o

meh yeah but its poetry so...

Ye',but poetry DOES need to flow

Pfft you diss goths so........pffft.

PS. You oly wanted this girl for her looks huh!!

But seriously..I read like 3 lines. The lines are just too long and have no flow. Sorry.

Pfft you diss goths so........pffft.

PS. You oly wanted this girl for her looks huh!!

But seriously..I read like 3 lines. The lines are just too long and have no flow. Sorry.

Not at all. " My love for you deep in my heart will always be there" :hehe:

I'm just not attracted to her anymore....Like if your boyfriend went bald in one day...


Its hard to put all my emotions in a short line :(

lol if my bf went bald i'd still love him! It woudn't matter.

Yer record is 8-3 KayJay and NOT 8-2

I was gunna change it but now I'm not cuz your being an annoying ass about it.

^Don't. Just make him mad :D

I was gunna change it but now I'm not cuz your being an annoying ass about it.

Whoooa,....looks who's talkin'?

Fine,dude,.....that's a good personal:)

Make love not war :D

^What do u want?:D

Read what it says! :D lol

No,..what do u REALLY want???

You? lol.

Why is that a question?:)

I thought you wanted me to want something!

I think if you could sit down write out everything your feeling then pick out the most important parts. After that just condence it and add a little rythem. I didn't get into it sorry but I could feel exactly what u were trying to put across.