my apalagez goez out to every one that was readin
im sorry that it waz my bad to have ur trust diseven
my mind was runin out time, timez up the bus is leaven
so to diside if i should cut stuff that already had a meaning
so this evening, im writen to re-gain somethin that i couldnt take back
i lost my train of thought so i thought i could take the fake track
an i mistaked that, feelingz that i had for a chick her name waz becky
an just what she put me through made me so sick i lost the resapea
to cook up a deacent rhyme in her name
i could find the exstacy in readin a mind, then the winter came
an froze over my cold hart that couldnt start
the story over that song had to re-tart
feelingz i had for this bitch who stabed an wouldnt quit
she made me so mad i couldnt pick up were i use to print
with my pen an my pad it waz like a hick up that chouse to sight
in the depts of my stomic were my pain use to stay
so consepts of a low bugget so i didnt have to go back in the same day
of bull shit were i could think of nuthin
exsept of her it felt like i waz startin to sink it hounestly it was disgustin

some of the lines need help with flow . 7/10

^Same here

it came from the sole brotha

I accept with Creflo & KayJay.
7.5/10
Can't see anything enough special to pay attention

thanx dawg

It was good man, I liked it.

thanx dawg i havent heard from u in like a minet dawg

haha. hit me up on that diss...please?

hey thanx fo yallz feed back an im sorry agen