YO-YO, Yo When I stand at the plate, My whole plans to degrate
Quick to walk up to a man with an 8 and hand him his fate//haha
Some of the topics i've done is pitiful but i've only done the mininal
but shit, Everything in the rap game now is unnoriginal
Im over the stress, holdin my breath knowin the best is i'll never be dead
not holdin the techs, rollin in vettes, flowin the best but every word is cleverly said
I'll leave a bitch in an arm cast I'm far past rusted
I'm more or less blunted cruisin with all my car glass busted
I'm a comedian you might have seen me in that porno
with twin midgits connected at the corn-row
I'll rip your torso out through your anus
Then glue my dick to the end of barrel an use it to aim with
I'm in full support of cocaine like darrel strawberrys agent
Most rappers are like constipated people, they aint shit
Domestic disturbance in a majestic occurance mixed relfections assurance
The next is the churches the rest isnt urgent dont mess with the perfect im blessed with the verses

^^^^oooooooo

Wanna make me mad today dummy? then take rehab away from me
killin spree rates through three states its made funny
All made comical matters through talk shows an these comedians jokin
Im not A topical rapper but raw flows is me, Its me bein Tokin
the leave me alone then in some wise words, allow me to quote him
"I'm gonna put my dick in it if you leave you mouth open"
Redd Foxx, but fuck it he's dead an my balls weigh more than led blocks
So i'll feed on instinct and Think With my dick an balls
After ten drinks i'll send links to brink an get applause
Da Da Duh Da Da, Watch me shit my draws
.....there now im filled with some confidence
Thats what it takes to Appeal to the audience
Need some losanges my esophagus collapsed
Co-Operatives, ha bitches swallowin my sac
Put the hollows in the mack, no, im at the ramada inn where shaqs coilin
im not psycotic infact, i just mixed his vodka with rat poison
Its evident to see I'm hesitant to flee I wanna stick around for seven centuries
But ever since emcees have ever went with me, I've been spittin the rhymes fuckin elementary
Dont ever insult me my specialtys multies cause i'll piss on your head and you cleverly wont see
Im stuck in the back shit uppin the axis, at home with bricks stuffin a mattress
Do I mean it when I say Fuck The World? shit im already naked fuckin the Atlas

hahahaha

I hate my town, I mean this land gets shitty
but hey, at least it aint Kansas City

this must have been a keystyle, otherwise i'm kind of worried :) and you need to improve the way you write it... at least make a new line after each bar, so it's easier to read... the lyrics were okay i guess, but that yo yo yo thing could have been left out.. :p

keep it up, and help us populate this forum... it's appreciated

I liked it :) It had a kinda of aggressive bizzarre thing going on :)

Originally posted by MC Tokin
YO-YO, Yo When I stand at the plate, My whole plans to degrate
Quick to walk up to a man with an 8 and hand him his fate//haha
Some of the topics i've done is pitiful but i've only done the mininal
but shit, Everything in the rap game now is unnoriginal

Nice. Now THAT is my kind of multi, but...

i]Originally posted by MC Tokin [/i]
Im stuck in the back shit uppin the axis, at home with bricks stuffin a mattress
Do I mean it when I say Fuck The World? shit im already naked fuckin the Atlas

Too similar to the end of Hustlers and Hardcore. DOn't know if it was an intentional flip on it though...

what up Tokin

this was ill yes... had sum dynamik multiples...

keep it up

and i hate kansas 2

I appreciate the feeback, i'll give some to yall

this must have been a keystyle, otherwise i'm kind of worried and you need to improve the way you write it... at least make a new line after each bar, so it's easier to read... the lyrics were okay i guess, but that yo yo yo thing could have been left out..

Yeah it was a keystyle, but this is what i hate about textin, people judge the flow but the flow is determined by the reader :(
not good for it....And as far as the Yo Yo Yo goes, everybody is the same, i look for ways to be original...you should too...

and yeah, i derived it from hustlers an hardcore

Tek - "and i hate kansas 2" hahahahaha