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and it dont stop
rip eachotter

I can crush you wit a rap/
Leave you begging me to stop/
Soon as I pop this shit off you’ll know I’m the one who’s hot/
Whether or not you’ve got lyrical skills you can’t test me/
On the mic I’ll push you off wit a verse ~ (next please)/
Leave you on your knees while your begging for defeat/
I got a pair of machete’s that’ll slice you into meat/
So my only choice in this matter is to batter you with a rap/
Coz you crap Mentol-Ill, your over wit this attack/
Ima leave the way it is and that is that/
So until next time, happy rapping where’s my stats?

iight this kid ak2002, this fool is gonna get ripped in 2/
and thats sad, cuz you dont spit but drool/
cuz no one can feel you, even if that gave you a hand job/
so back off, before i'll rip yo' ass in half like i done to yo' mom/
cuz you both suck, like houstan 500, you'll still blow-jobs/
so you could wear black shirt in nevada, and still wont be hot/
just a like a 30 year old vigin, i wont be fucked wit/
cuz i'm coming out ill, like the doc giving me the prescripion-of-the-wrong-medecine/
i'd just burned you like touching a pottery kin, fuck it imma melt yo' skin/
then put it in a cup and make you drink it , but you'll still wont know whats illness/
after this you'll know who it is, mentol-ill splitin your battle spit/
you must be my bitch, cuz i just fucked you quick/

uppin this bitch

i vote for mentol-ill simply 'cos i couldn't see any real punches in ak2002's verse.

Only criticism of Mentol is i thought his flow was a little weird.

But anyways - nice verse.

PZ>

vote - mentol...

reason - less whack

dope on to the next round. :D

yeah mentol had a few punchlines in there at least. Alright gentleman, i expect a great deal more maiming in the next round, chop chop. hehe.

i choose mentol-ill simply because his metaphors and similes were higher skilled than ak2002

mentol took this easily, wit the first couple lines.
the other cat has some potential. but
learned from his mistake hopefully.... don't come wack.

vote-mentol