call me the man from the land of the wisconvicts
proble the man who cant stand to be ahounest
hollow heat to brand through that trend to be abolished
you cant stop this nolage with hiphop to go polish
cracked up rymez in to skalaz, fuck riden impalaz
im stuck hiden in shock collaz
cuz thats they only way i can be taimed call it electroshock theripy
afraid your pac can go away from the dinesty
you can try to prime me like your trin to start your engien
but dont remind me like your heart you try rememberin
you try to stop thinkin about it but, you cant cuz of they efredrine
keep you up all night tawsen an turnen then its cawsen you to be determen
to prova them wrong with the question they ask
thats when you get the best impreshion of an ass
thats when you test they desgreshion of ur past
when you were suferin from depreshion an every one would lauph
but ur sympothy was a mental gilt trip for your self
to stencil wilt split then ignore ur help
that ur fellingz are weak an eazaly brocken
like ur febill nee that u hoop around with no notetion
that mabe you should get the shit fixed, instead of the sad story of the misphits
call me the doc that perscrips
the reality slap to nock u unconchents
then ur wake up call has just adrived
an its respounces is, mistakes are made but thay cant be brived
with founy liez but it only tiez with the evil that lives in side ur mind
dont try to hide from denile, thats dumb
you can try to profile the drinks at the tavrine
you can try to be mobile wtih the drinks down ur chin
go home to you an ur spouse shouten, its about then
you relize your traped in the madness, when you plane a kiss
an it turns into ur wife gettin hit, an a fight bout to brack out any minet
then ur kid is they only witness, watch him grip his fist
an wishes he's old enouph to give him his
whats comen
fuck bloufin
if only i was twonty one or sometin then this disgushen
would be soveled, emoushen flowen like nieagra falls
only exploshion bracken ur balls
with sadness given you a sharp pain in ur stomic
ur card game might plumit
if ur disruptin ur old man or somethin
then say good by to black jack you might bust if you react fast
but if you train with pationts youll have a thried degree black belt blast
then your aponet will be in a room for emergancy, u know he felt that crash
so this lessen is for the peole who herass others no matter who it is
from school students in a class or mothers or the fathers who shader kids
jus know in the futcher disaster is comen faster then od bein disasterist

(an wishes he's old enouph to give him his, whats comen fuck bloufin if only i was twonty one or sometin then this disgushen would be soveled)

"this is sayen if they kid was 21 he'd fight back"

(ur card game might plumit if ur disruptin ur old man or somethin, then say good by to black jack you might bust if you react fast)

"wich is leadin up to this, "black jack 21 if u have a decsent number an react quick with that number you might bust if u hit" "get it"

need feed back please!

i need ur help from whom ever need a titel so i can turn this key style into a song.....well most of it was a keystyle but the rest tokk me alittel bit to type an thats why i need ur feed back ill give yall feed back as well

Od, you are REALLY improved from when you first started. Proud of you. Major props. Maybe call it 'We Ain't Talkin' 'Bout Me', cause the keystyle seemed to avoid talkin about you as much as possible.

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kool thanx much apreshated i might use that for the title or use that to help find a title thanx agen

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od is gay

hey when are you an mark comein over to my side of town

od is gay
what nigga cane wyte or lame dike

mark is with alex so maybe when he goes back 2 GB i'll come wit n we'll go to ur house

aight

od, you said you would rate my shit, so do it.

hmmm i wasnt really feelin this piece it needs work in the rhyming and flow

well i was jus try en somethin new