i leve spores freeze doorz deszed thornz
i bleed whorez seaze yourz feed dinosorez
with your corps but this pictures warped
you can barely make out the imagez
leave you bernen were the evil pidjionz live
and no for givenesses cuz no one will for give me
thats the world and how the tenance might be
so fuck the world and who evers in it
im not afrade of death any more cuz i no how far i can push my limit
pill afater pill un till the last pill diminished
then i wake up in a casket boddel finished
i cant help to make these hollow disigionz
i swallow pirsionz
then drownd in my tearz of agany
but i found my bears thanks for reality
and thats when its sad for me
to feel my anger and upressed angwish
when i reveal the darkness with my finger cold a genst this stainless
have you on pressed on the floor an leave ur brain a mess
how can i taim this evil that i try to ride a genst
should i just try to make admendz
but thats when i find my self on the line of fire
its a barebaric world to live when when ur minds is they entire
war fair no pair so there then ask my self go were
cuz i cant find a safe place to hide
fuck it im jus gona chase this ride while im still alive

jus need some feed back u know i will allwayz give feed back to uall

goddamn man 7/10... that shit's tight

can u go to tha thing intitald "check dis shit out (not that good but fck it!)" and pppllllzzzz give feedback on tha second rap plz not tha first

thanx man com on thow seven out of ten that shit should at least be like eight or nine out of ten but ohwell thax 4 ur feed back

can u go to tha thing intitald "check dis shit out (not that good but fck it!)" and pppllllzzzz give feedback on tha second rap plz not tha first
aight man

pleaze more feed back if i mispellt a word jus ask an ill do my best to corect it so it makes more sence for you

tha shit was good not a 9/10 but real good, peace

ya thta took me only a half an hour to write that shit

uve never spit anything that good that ive seen before..keep elevating

thanx man