(tell me what you think its a follow up to do you know)


Hey motherf**ker take a peek around that corner
i told you i was comin
got a little something for ya
why the fuck are you runnin
have a little f**kin decency
I stood there and took it
while you beat the shit out of me
don't try end tell me that shit wasn't you
i look down and i can still see my blood on your shoe

I'm not gonna play games
i ain't gonna hide
i'm comin for you face to face
no one is on your side
why don't you just look
around the corner of that wall
and maybe i will end it quick and
just watch your body fall

don't be so fuckin stupid
you definitley ain't that lucky
i am gonna make you taste pain

you'll feel this shit for the last seconds
of your life
you will taste the cold steel
As i push into you with a knife
and make you feel so fucking empty
like you made me feel
as i lost my grip on life
how does it feel to see your blood
stainin the floor in front of you red
and feel your head nearly crushed
don't you wish you were dead

Welcome to oblivion
Theres no one here to help you
no-one to hear your screams
it's only you and me here
Goodnight motherfucker
Sweet dreams>>>>

*Boom*

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love it your sick man:)twisted work there i no what your saying
and dude hell yeah i want mroe

thats awsome love your work

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love it your sick man:)twisted work there i no what your saying
and dude hell yeah i want mroe


Thanx once again i'm really glad you like it, i thought a follow up would be cool so thats what you've read i'm working on another one stay tuned will be here soon.... +peace+

thats awsome love your work

Thanx i'm glad you liked it........Much Respect>>>>>>> +peace+

i love it..i haven't read the first part, but i love this one..i'll have to take the time to find the other one....i love you! lmao!:D

Thanx once again i'm really glad you like it, i thought a follow up would be cool so thats what you've read i'm working on another one stay tuned will be here soon.... +peace+

lmao helll yeah im sticking around your poetrys sick

lmao helll yeah im sticking around your poetrys sick

thanx again it's nice to have a fan (lol) i think i'm goona dedicate the next one to you> MOre of the same or something different? let me know
Thanx again>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> +peace+

something different just becuase!! but then again the same would be good too! LOL

how about both:D