well im bored so heres my anti-bored reaction to when i am bored.. get it?

i pay checks after checks//
nothin to look foward to until the next chic comes by//
grab the girl and find a room near by, make sure she dont pop till morning//
cuz ill cum out and play real hard after the sunshine//
accusations our for accuser so accuse me of being ruff//
and your shit just got a lil more thicker//
me and my boyz dont play game unles it invovles toys//
so talk all nasty and come on after me//
ill show your punk ass whats really up//
crawl, shoot, kill thats what you bargen for?///
your just another ill preacher tryin to get a reacord deal//
remind me of m and m's you come in all different colors//
if i pick the right one im the grand winner//
so stick out your toes and count to ten//
by then my thugs have already evaucated your room//
with all your junk in my trunk//
i figure ass liek that is a dime a dozen//
thats why i brought 50 cent so your ass dont get shot up//
nine holes in a man thought he'd be a lil ill rusty//
but nah he made a huge record deal//
with the only man that has faith in coward to put up a fight//
you like to role-play so i assume you always have shit your way//
well i welcome yall to my city where ladiez our free//
and men dont come cheap i just switched the flow//
to make you all blow over and rethink your priorties//
tick... tock.. its your time step in said the reaper//
and ill show you the white light today// ((done))

if you want a challenge ill go for ya.. i suck tho..
but 8 bars due asap if you do! :-B

you need to elevate and it was a keystyle not a freestyle

Part Two

I lived most of my live by the pistol smoke//
so im guessing when a girl says she wants to elope shes real?//
last girl left me cuz i had no record deal//
when a bitch tell me to rep my hood. i know shes not for real//
so ill make this a quicke for you and ill see how cum you never had a beer//
ohh i see.. boyfriend hated when you had a good time//
so now your always chasing after playa's on the grind//
more boys for you makes you look a like a bigger hoe//
if you say my name enough i might just take ya home//
i got my scope on this chic for sayin i ride so many dicks its sick//
dont arouse my anger cuz all my homies our down for my splatter//
i got a ill revenge so screw with me and your be in the waters with teh fishes//
thats your kids look so nice remind me of a young obie trice//
one false move there out throwin ice//
sellin dope what happend to them being so nice?//
i think you lie for a living so you get recontion//
hate when people stare but love when people treat you like a king//
not for long i got a buck stash wasted on you//
better not stick your head out that door!!(done)

you need to elevate and it was a keystyle not a freestyle

ight propz for the advice

went to the candyshop
got me candy with 50 cents
its a gay ass line
but it bought me a girl to take home//
sweet ass girl till i gave her a cavaity///
fixed it up by having her suck the milk right outta me!//


now its hell and heaven//
or heaven and hell//
either way you put it your ass is down for the count//
i hear ya heart racin fast like i just busted a diss track//
and you have nothin to come back at me with//
your asian not black, no niggas in your park like i lined up in chalk//
ya thats us we spit bananas so we kill gorillaz//
bitch gripp'en the holster like hes suppose to know what to do//
hes only thirteen and already tryin to act like you//
ill leave ya a lesson you wont even know what to do//
something about rhyming just makes a man feel like he almost knows you//
when he cant get the words all together and looks like a bigass clown//
its not all about the rimz and hoes that make the world twirl around//
hard shit yall cant handle it so ill give ya the recipe to grandma's kitchen//
can yall handle well under pressure?//
server the appitizers then the meal//
you remind me a lot like christmas happy before i unrap//
damn homie you and me had it all layed out till you fucked with me//
the future was bright we were young under the street light//
till one night rodney came home and fucked it all away//
like he did to aunt hellen still in the hospital still recovering//
from stains to the brain, he dump you quick//
best antidote is to run to the door quick//
before the chamber unloads on your corpes//
it was like a fairytale in the end everythin was meant to be//
a car all sleeked out and a girl named chery//
but when i blow i tend to screw with the mind//
ever rhyme i scare and ever line i send straight to hell//
untl the devil is sick with that shit and sends it back//
but you didnt want it to end this way but you sure wanted to start it this way//
until one day i didnt take the shit anymore loaded the chamed//
no its not a lyme in my pocked its a nine i already cocked it//
im dyin to pop it!(done)

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