checkin in drop in a minet

ok od in partners in rhyme
for starters we find more dark words to disine
an smarter wayz to combine
then rip u apart like a turbien
nothin is worst then a mind
of a mad man that curst the sun togive u cancer
instead of a bad tan i eat u rhymez like pac man
eat the dots about as big as a grane of sand
got u a seat in the lot were the plane land
guse whos flyen sadhom and a tala ban
if u cant start replien well i can
walk the extra mile to mark ya the deceaced next to profeil
with this multie style ur is like mucalycalken on trile
you look nerves you hardly smile
but u did when u were at jacksons party its a dog pile doggystyle
and i dont mean snoops cd but it groups with eazy and e
and thats how you were asked to take it; in they ass by clay aykenn
an two hits of exstacy; then hes like you bitch next to me
spyder take up the ofer cuz that wil be they only time u get sex for free

all i know i murked u with multies

umm..this dude is a free-win..hes crazy if he thinks i cant see-him..
you take 30..im takn 10 minutes..
an im still 3 times better..dude ima win-this..ya finished ya verse is deminished..
this shit is basically freestyle..cept i put it in a sentence..
fuck you..wheres my gun..lets watch what this-thompson-do..
he cant be ill ..cmon he's from wisconsin-dudes...
i take tha shottie out...as tha gauge hits tha base kid....
ya bodys-down..ya like ya pic..your just wasted..
i kno that im ill..but i dont wanna ova-boast..
my punches killed this kid..i think he just 'over dosed'
im spittin it sick an this script isnt writtin
an dude im known for rippn an flippn..
how clever this 'pussy' entire crew is just kittins..
they claimn they pir(pur)i thought theses cats were just kiddn..
this tha last bar..cmon i gotta end you..
an why even step dawg ..cuzz even frees..u cant contend-dude...lmao..ok ok vote up

Uppin This One For Votes

spyder took this

punches spyder
mulites spyder
wordplay none
vocab od
flow both
overall spyder

punches - spydar
mulites - spydar
wordplay - none
vocab - od
flow - both
overall - spydar

punches spyder
mulites spyder
wordplay spyder
vocab od
flow od
overall spyder

although I really think you both could of done a hell of a lot better, I gotta go with one that at least made more sense....I'll leave it open til you see the results....be a man, take the defeat with pride.

punches spyder
mulites spyder
wordplay spyder
vocab od
flow od
overall spyder

although I really think you both could of done a hell of a lot better, I gotta go with one that at least made more sense....I'll leave it open til you see the results....be a man, take the defeat with pride.

kari..i just gotta say somethin..you sayn i think both of u coulda done better..well..u honestly cant expect more than my verse..for a ten minute keystyle..i mean..i spit tha shit off tha head..i dont see any one person on this board commn nice in a quick freestyle..im not sayn no one can..i just havnt seen anyone

close this thread

suck it up and take it like a man nancy