View Full Version : Ranked Pro Piece...Bite and Die


Queen Murda
06-10-2005, 04:23 PM
They say im 'delicious' cuz every nigga stay 'bitin on my verses'/
I kno im 'vicious' you wan be me say it jus quit 'fightin des urges'/
Suspect tha 'unexpected' this 'dame' spit 'flames' thas 'hectic'/
Shirt redder den a sign wit 'exit' pop a slug and leave ya chest 'congested'/...

You 'phasin' me is like mase 'facin' diplomatic 'immunity'/
You jus goin thru 'puberty' n u think im scared of what you could 'do 2 me'/
u got da be 'foolin me' dat 'insane' shit you talkin could 'spark beef'/
You a 'gangsta' You'll end up goner like Eddie Cain out tha "Heartbeats'/

He can't admit just 'yet' im da illest emcee 'He Kno'/
So I'm finna spray dis 'pest' and swat away dis 'Misquito'/
Biterz i'll wanna 'quote it' im da sickness you can't 'cope wit '//
Im leavin fa u 'choke' 'Sick' so when they say Murda Queen 'wrote it'/

I neva 'give ups' to fakes cuz they b 'boasted on propz'/
I mite jus spray or 'clip up' ya 'spot' neva shoulda 'posted ya loc'/
If you aint 'noticed im hot' wit a 'vessle' get 'mo when ya arc'/
Ya 'blowin ya popz' ring 'yellow' dat 'glow in da dark'/

Holla @ me!!

BaD_AsS
06-10-2005, 08:15 PM
haha sweet

Carnage™
06-10-2005, 10:07 PM
That was pretty nice,the flow was sort of on and off but it was straight for the most part.a few good multies that flowed well,some nice metaphor's.some ok wordplay and punches.Vocab was pretty good as well.It was overall pretty good.You've elevated a lot since the last time you were here.

Diatribe
06-10-2005, 11:15 PM
yeah shes elevated where you been neways

Queen Murda
06-11-2005, 09:31 PM
Tryna elevate...Avoidin beef...Doin me...

...This site is being crushed by newbies, wack ones at that!

Diatribe
06-12-2005, 07:56 PM
I know huh

Darkness
06-13-2005, 09:57 AM
damn, that was tight

Donnie-Darkflow
06-13-2005, 03:05 PM
They say im 'delicious' cuz every nigga stay 'bitin on my verses'/
I kno im 'vicious' you wan be me say it jus quit 'fightin des urges'/
Suspect tha 'unexpected' this 'dame' spit 'flames' thas 'hectic'/
Shirt redder den a sign wit 'exit' pop a slug and leave ya chest 'congested'/...

You 'phasin' me is like mase 'facin' diplomatic 'immunity'/
You jus goin thru 'puberty' n u think im scared of what you could 'do 2 me'/
u got da be 'foolin me' dat 'insane' shit you talkin could 'spark beef'/
You a 'gangsta' You'll end up goner like Eddie Cain out tha "Heartbeats'/

He can't admit just 'yet' im da illest emcee 'He Kno'/
So I'm finna spray dis 'pest' and swat away dis 'Misquito'/
Biterz i'll wanna 'quote it' im da sickness you can't 'cope wit '//
Im leavin fa u 'choke' 'Sick' so when they say Murda Queen 'wrote it'/

I neva 'give ups' to fakes cuz they b 'boasted on propz'/
I mite jus spray or 'clip up' ya 'spot' neva shoulda 'posted ya loc'/
If you aint 'noticed im hot' wit a 'vessle' get 'mo when ya arc'/
Ya 'blowin ya popz' ring 'yellow' dat 'glow in da dark'/

Holla @ me!!

damb i didnt now you could flow that sick