this shit i spit is worst then 50s massicer
ill have every mcs heart beaten faster
its all lauphter
to me and this song is a diss tward fifty
but my misstake for me to judge u
jus look at my transcip and see al the drugs i do
im still serpized that im still alive
when it comes to drugs i dont beat around the bush i beat the beehive
wush then its all over im tell u dog i wish i could stay sober
but this shit called an addiction
if i only new what typ of shit i would get in
maby i would consiter fuck consitering as we speak im shouten up
jus to really tell u od dozent give a fuck
im that nut comen to class high and weren a trench cout
with an m16 and a masheady to slit a throut
what bitch u think i wont
wana be my exspearament
let me cut ur fucken eyes out now reading has become a impearament
so try to read this
lyrics not ment for the skweamish
mean as shit allways promounten vilance
i havent tried scence
i killed bubba sparkxxx when he came out with diliverance
children tied to a fence
a mind filled with suspence
fucket im gona stop speaking
its not my fault if u dont belive me that i have a chain saw and i cant stop swinging
my arms in a full cercall if i ever become famous ill make violence go comershal

its not to good not u to my abilety

it was tight, but ur other ones wer betta

not bad...
i like your use of words

it suxs it was proble the worst freestyle i had on here every thing beside insain person was a feestylebut there will be dayz like this

yah the "jsta rhyme" or wut ever was terrible lyke errything besides my battle wit sar_crew was a freestyle...

Those rhymes are ok.
And now I have given feedback 5 times, I can create my own thread.

dont ask just do it if you now you gave feed back