extra terestral with lazor pistals
moon people with marjor isues
that trurn critical
you cant stop they orical cuz im invisabel
with all this science fiction
that truns ur mind into a prision
the phenix finaly rizen
and put out the fire it will rize agen
fire that blind the men to comprehend
my metaforical story get a tap mesure and lisn befor you ignore me
spit illagitament words so hard core to read
miss the metaphore then set sail to shore be for you ski
the force of the wake will make you see whats up
be for your forced to still take the boowee and get fucked up
take a minet to realize what thouse last two bars ment
begin to analize the thought in the past when lars went
all rich and thats when the band strated to fall quick
its up to you you pick and see whos the tru monster
of some kind; watch there, drugs make a dumb mind

i have gave feed back to p-dub bad ass cane wyte j man xl xoshady now please give od some fucken feed back

extra terestral with lazor pistals
moon people with marjor isues
that trurn critical
you cant stop they orical cuz im invisabel
with all this science fiction
that truns ur mind into a prision
the phenix finaly rizen
and put out the fire it will rize agen
fire that blind the men to comprehend
my metaforical story get a tap mesure and lisn befor you ignore me
spit illagitament words so hard core to read
miss the metaphore then set sail to shore be for you ski
the force of the wake will make you see whats up
be for your forced to still take the boowee and get fucked up
take a minet to realize what thouse last to bars ment
begin to analize the thought in the past when lars went
all rich and thats when the band strated to fall quick
its up to you you pick and see whos the tru monster
of some kind; watch there, drugs make a dumb mind

this one is for the smarter peeps

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yah i gave u plenty of feedback but this is tight 8.99/10

thanks man ull all ways get a word out of od oh ya how do get thows grafix under ur name

well sum how u get to a setting place then they'll be a list and 1 sais avatar settings and u can chose.... but i dont remember how to get there..

thanks a whole fucken lot that helps ass j/k

seriously im gona quit posten threads if i dont get any feed back fucket ill keep posten but ill stop given feed back to people that i give feed back to and dont give two shits and a fuck about my stuff

if you need me to explain me metaphores i will for peeps that dont get it

nice twistin it up for the smart dudes
i give you props man
i like it

thanks banks

yea man im kinda new at this shit but that was pretty good man i wanna battle someone but dont no how help me out bro

metaforical

hmm next time spell it right but it was pretty tyte 8/10

thanx but some times i jus type so fast an i dont relize my misspelled words

yea man im kinda new at this shit but that was pretty good man i wanna battle someone but dont no how help me out bro
go to the loung and youll find peeps there and then ull go to mind feild and that will solve your case