they say whoodini was the greatest excape artist/ i wonder if he could live my life n excape the darkness/ excape what i started/ excape this addiction that made me retarded/ prolly lose my life in this war another soldier departed/ drugs will be the death of me but i do um regardless/ i've walked in the valley of death n journyd the farthest/ once the reeper get me i'll be another ghost in the darkness/ every where i go i bring the emotional scars with/ so many bad memories when i see my scard wrist/ this addiction is prision n the bars thick/ fuckin wit this many drugs is a large risk/ when it comes 2 pills i've done i have the largest list/ i'm an illegal pharmicist/ introduce evil 2 the smartest kids/ give um pills 2 pop n sniff/ man i've done some rotten shit/ at least i wont b the only 1 that'll die tastin oxycottin drips/

that was tight tommy terets

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Cane Whyte, I like your rhymes.

thanks j man

j man is a fagget

he sux dick

lol,....

What did u thinkof my ryhme

BARS! Fuck sakes. Like this:
I'm a star/
I'll go far/

Shit like that.

who gives a fuck how u type it words are still the same, and that ryhme is old i dont know why its on this page

Apparently, I care, because then I feel like reading it.

nice shit cane

thanx Sharke i'll check out some of ur shit sometime

thort that spit was tight dawg,nice drop keep writing 9/10

who gives a fuck how u type it words are still the same, and that ryhme is old i dont know why its on this pageIt's on page one because you posted in this thread after seven months went by.

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