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First to 5 Votes
No TKO
20 Bars No More Or Less...
Must Include Opponents Name!
No Dickrydin'/Alies/Crew Votes....

Aight laid out.... So "Shoot"

~eZ~

You have to wait till tomorrow for my verse aight. I got work shortly and gotta do my verse for the tournament, i didnt even know i was facin u too. but anyways, ill put somethin up tomorrow

aight, heres my verse. im not very good, but i enjoy the practise, and this should be even more dissapointing as its like 5 am and i am bored as shit, but ima do what i can........

Hocus Pocus, here's a trick focus
Ima do worst to you then god did with moses
Fuck locusts, ima give you the real deal
And old fashioned drive by while im behind the wheel
Squeal, run, tell who you can,
But ima come back and do it again man
Aight? This is straight up gangsta shit
So pick up your wits, finish your shit and move on bitch
My rhymes are out of this world, ya know, intergalactic
While in 5 years you gonna be askin "Paper or Plastic?"
You try to be tough, act like a big shot
But you the type that rats their boys out, So they dont get caught
You try to be a big man, so you can fit in
But when it comes to confrontation, you just a chickin
Finger lickin good, cluckidy cluck cluck
You askin "should we do that?" Im sayin I dont give a fuck
Back to the drive by, Ima fly by
Pull the trigger and you go bye bye
You can try but you will die
Which is really me beatin you, when you throw down your rhyme

People say they can get the flow with some of my stuff, i just read this shit smoothly and easily, so read it till u can get the flow people aight?

aight hea it is.. first in awhile.... who knows how it'll cum out-- 6am, hea... and i'm bored an burnt out(jus gettin over ma buzz) What Ev..


gunna come up at yah "straighter" than an "arrow"
"tell truth", knock ya so small; gonna fit in a hole narrow//
we all know why you be called tha TruFanOfTheMan
bottom line is rick ride dick, don't act like u didn't understand
ma lyrics not needed "u dont get it", i got "both" a ma "hand"
i'm tha star while ur " jus tha fan of tha man" me tha show-band//
not gunna sit here like you an "TYPE" completely "random~shit"
i'm tha "pusher" ur tha "abuser", tricks like u i jus "hand~em~it"
din't even need ta "read~ur~shit",jus wrote this afta "scannin~it"//
like "Benefit" I tell "My Story" I've stomped on cats like u all ma life
u couldn't "shine"over me if u were a "light gleamin" on a~"knife"
it'd b impossible fer u ta "score" "a win" in a fight if u were ma~"wife
your shits so "keif", it wouldn't even "stress" a manic dipresant's "life"//
accepted this "fight" put ta "music" thinkin you'd be at least a lil' smarter
in a battle you gotta "slam harder" than "Onyx" or "#-15" "Vince Carter"
i'm a chew it up, digest it and "spit it" so much "harder" and "farther"//
in all truth, u still wouldn't be "HOT" if i lit ur ass directly on "fire"
you'll never be above me! even if you were a "bird on a wire"//
now tha "Truth~Hurts" and your jus' totally "addicted" to my style
"i'm out"; jus leave ya ta "ponder" this "awhile"; as i leave wit "my~smile"//

Aight there it is... 20 bars.... whatev. not mabest buh s' all good--
well i'm out peoples....

Don't Sleep! Upp'n Fer Votes!!

~ eZ~



----Edited spelling mistakes an crap.. unable to b made out really bored/tired----

Hmmm pretty good battle...

TrueFan :


Hocus Pocus, here's a trick focus
Ima do worst to you then god did with moses


I like how this line sounds/flows but it doesn't make sense. What did God do to Moses? I think you got him confused with Job. Yeah this might be nick picking but I had to point it out.

I like these lines though


My rhymes are out of this world, ya know, intergalactic
While in 5 years you gonna be askin "Paper or Plastic?"



Focus:

These lines are nice!


not gunna sit here like you an "TYPE" completely "random~shit"
i'm tha "pusher" ur tha "abuser", tricks like u i jus "hand~em~it"


Overall I think Focus had more and better punches. TrueFan had a couple parts that were kinda off flow too...


You try to be tough, act like a big shot
But you the type that rats their boys out, So they dont get caught


So...

VOTE = Focus

can't be assed to post a big-ass explanation - but i vote for TRUEFANOFTHEMAN .


I just felt him more and i got some good flow from his - but both came pretty ill and it was close.


Some nice lines i can't be bothered ta quote.

But thats it. HONEST

PZ>

Trufan had a really good rhyme I think.FoCus didn't grab me in like Truefan did and you touched on him being the "truefanoftheman" to much.Once is good,but twice and more it starts gettin old,dont get me wrong,I liked both rhymes,but True grabbed me in better

Vote~Truefanoftheman

Originally posted by Shady Makaveli

I like how this line sounds/flows but it doesn't make sense. What did God do to Moses? I think you got him confused with Job. Yeah this might be nick picking but I had to point it out.



God didnt do anything to Moses, Together god and Moses unleashed i think 7 wraths upon Egypt until his people were set free. Some of these included millions and millions of Locusts, umm, frogs and shit came in swarms, the first born children of egypt were killed and there were more. Hence, ima do to you worst then god did WITH moses, not TO. Does that make more sence now?

Originally posted by TrueFanOfTheMan
You try to be tough, act like a big shot
But you the type that rats their boys out, So they dont get caught


Now, i thought that this line may have gotten people off track, but read it like this

You try to be tough, act like a big shot
But you the type that rats their boys out, (pause for a second) So they dont get caught

I dunno, I read it just fine, it flows and sounds good. Hope that helps

aight, enuff quoteables here, but IMO Truefanoftheman was a little off, where as focus's was nice an i could get it-

also, focus u had more punches, an were stonger...

but as usual for me flow an punches win it, could go into more detail but couldn't b assed to!

God didnt do anything to Moses, Together god and Moses unleashed i think 7 wraths upon Egypt until his people were set free. Some of these included millions and millions of Locusts, umm, frogs and shit came in swarms, the first born children of egypt were killed and there were more. Hence, ima do to you worst then god did WITH moses, not TO. Does that make more sence now?


Oh lol my bad...

well tru's gettin much betta, the paper or plastic line was hot.... but vocab and concepts are still pretty basic.

focus had more thought ful lines, but in several places had me guessin what he ment...

close but I'll give it to tru fan cause it had a better impact and I understood it better.

...::; 3-2 For TrueFanOfTheMan ;::...

UPP'N Don't Sleep

TrueFan... defenitely. Tighter flow, was funnier, and made more sense.

I'll give it to TrueFan - sometimes less is more which holds true in this case