My mind is set on a man I don't even know
I think I want him - outside does it show?
By the look in his eyes I felt I could see right thru
The scars on his soul in his life, more than few.
The stories he told me in the short time we spoke
Made me think twice about everything I wrote.
Now I see that my life isn't harsh and cruel,
Compared to his full of anger and fuel.
He uses it as a gift to help save souls.
He helped save mine now I owe him my whole
Everything I could give I would so he could live
He's a good cause - not a charity - but I'd give
I'd give almost everything to feel his hands
on my body again - on my body like then
Just a moment stolen, just a moment golden
Just a moment to hold him, a moment I owe him.
People say he's just trouble they say to beware
I can't help it if I'm curious - I don't care.

this one is really good and i like it alot. seems like a thing lots people may go through so it relates to every one

awww hunny ive been threw the same thing kinda good writing keep posting them up

Kinks love u and i want 2 fuck

thank you for the comments, but...um....maybe keep those kinds of things to yourself Cane...

i was playin i was kinda fucked up. i m sure u know how that is

i was playin i was kinda fucked up. i m sure u know how that is

it's ok. I can forgive you ;) :p This one is one of my fave poems that I've written in the last little while, glad to know you like it.

nice poem- Deep perspective- Loving the title-