My heart is pounding trying to break my chest.
I am breaking, trying to tame my heart.
I am wandering trying to find my direction.
I am lost, going in a direction I don't know where it leads.
I am leading myself along this path.
I am trying to make my own path work.
I am working trying to make a living.
I am living trying to make my life.
I am living trying to be loved.
I am loving trying not to hurt.
I am hurting trying not to show the pain.
I am crying transparent tears trying not to let them fall.
I am trying.

i like ur poems keep writing

thanx for the comment. :) anymore?

i think ur very talented. in a way it kinda feels like i know u but i never met u or maybe i'm just high

You're ok

I liked how you started each line with yourself like analysing your inner thoughts

I liked how you started each line with yourself like analysing your inner thoughts

Yah I think that's what I was trying to get out of this one. Kinda like me talking to myself..?