and now its tyme
9-11 lines

goodluck killas

FINALLY

Well g'luck MCD

(But 9-11 lines? Man....)

MCD aka Butthole Bandit...your truely a fag groupie...
Whack newbie...you get 'no props' like low budget black movies...
As thoughts progess...I beat you once then lost respect...
Im 'kindhearted'..so i'll snatch yours to get that loss of ya chest...
I've been blessed to rhyme and sent to destroy you a 2nd time...
Yeah your verse looks good...only when posted next to mine...
Ya asshole is like a window of oppertunity...it opens fast...
For 'kicks'...i'll cut ya leg off and beat you with the broken half...
Dont get offended but ya 'flow is choppy' like diarhia...
I'll stike ya head with a flashlight and give you a 'bright idea'...
I feel ya style dog...its 'more bite' and less bark...
A race for ya manhood but your quick to give a 'head start'...
Battling me is like surgery...cause you'll always leave with a scar...
I'll smash ya hands with telescopes so you can 'reach for the stars'...

14........SO SUE ME

(Please don't DQ me)

Lets go to 14 instead....

ok..14 it is.......

<*%^Transcript 409328 - "Omen's destruction" %^>

This battles like 'sunbathing'..Omen bout ta get his 'ass tanned'
Get ripped-quick by the 'alley killer'..i'm like 'anthrax in a trashcan'
So now i'm gonna make like a 'penis' and 'stand up to this pussy'
You belong in-line-behind me faggot, no need to get pushy!!
Omen's claim-to-fame was by straight dissin my dawg Mentol-Ill
you Hillbilly inbred fuck, can't even afford to get dental on ya grill!
You're 'over the limit'...had to post 14 bars just to beat me
You couldn't come with the 'CrAzY Shit' if you were a 'psychologists faeces'
ha..Didnt you see the topical we posted about how you grew??
or did you duck it cuz it hurts you, and you cant handle the truth?!
See..now we all have the proof that Omen's endured a bad-life
just cuz its made ya 'Phsycotic-friendly' doesnt make ya 'mad nice!'
its like 'progressing through circles' cuz i'm 'movin on to the next round'
One foot on ya chest Bitch!!..This looks like a 'TKO' cuz Omens staying down!..........plop.....

Not votin cause i aint a judge, but i just wanted to say that both those verses were really damn good. i read mine over and i just get dissapointed. but i am tryin to improve with each battle. its fun. but yeah, good luck guys.

err..do we get any fuckin votes on this or what??..some judges:rolleyes:

Oblivion.

Hes a good bloke, deserves some respect.

BUT WHY THA FUCK IS NO-ONE VOTING!!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!





I would if i could Tek, you know it.....


PZ>

i read both verses at least 3 times a piece, extrememly close battle to me

Omen -

FLOW -7/10- flow was definitely working for you this time, it was composed and went nicely throughout most of it, it only fell off in a couple parts.

VOCAB-6/10- ARound average, nothing special but it was nice nonetheless.

LYRICISM-7/10- filled with multies and good punches and lines.

Highlights -

"Whack newbie...you get 'no props' like low budget black movies"

''Ya asshole is like a window of oppertunity...it opens fast...
For 'kicks'...i'll cut ya leg off and beat you with the broken half.."

"Dont get offended but ya 'flow is choppy' like diarhia...
I'll strike ya head with a flashlight and give you a 'bright idea''


OVERALL - 6.66/10

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

MCD -

FLOW - 6/10- flow fell off in a several places to me, some lines made it hard to flow to

VOCAB - 7/10- Definitely nice vocab in it, which makes it harder to rhyme so more props on that

LYRICISM- 6/10 - Had a few multies throughout, Had a couple of original dope punches

Highlight -

"So now i'm gonna make like a 'penis' and 'stand up to this pussy''



OVERALL - 6.33/10

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


VOTE ~ OMEN

this was a very good batle.. hard 2 decide...

omen
nice punch lines... good use of multis..
A race for ya manhood but your quick to give a 'head start'... that was agood one.... had a nice placement

mcd..
had sum good rhymin,, tha multiples werent as good as usual..

i like tah stand up line tah best./. it was good.. made tah verse hot..
had sum weak parts tho....

it was a close battle.. but ill hafta put a vote on OMEN

1