9-11 lines or you can have 12 or maybey even 13 or 14 or 15.. but that is it.. no more

good luck:D

Kash 11, worried cause your late
But Ima brush you away like Colgate Toothpaste
Cause Im wasted and Im out for a taste
And Ill beat yer ass any way
A boy trapped in a childs body
Still cant sleep without the support of his mommy
How Old's Kash? 12? 13?
And he just found out now that his dads a drag queen!
Subliminal Messages in all of my quotes
I be teachin him bout rap as he sits there and takes notes
And you know when he throws down, he'll look like a joke

It should be a max of 12 so that peoples patterns can be like 4 4 and 4 instead of 4 4 and 3. but i dont really care, just a thought

aiyo round one already this fucking clowns done/
throw me lyircaly beer all day and ill pound em/
a loser, yea i found one, he claims to be a true fan or something/
we knows he not a true man or nothing, cuz its his hand hes humping/
now climb down the ladder, cause u aint at the top line/
when im done, red stains all over your shirt like u painted a stop sign/
true fan of the man, your mom still walk with your hand in her hand/
we go do the same job, get money, and i steal your portoin/
leave your ass bankrupt like fuckin wheel of fortune/
get your momma pregant just so she knows the feel of abortion/
an early exit and a pair of pissed in pants, only thing this queer is sportin/

TrueFanOfTheMan -

Flow - 4/10 - Didnt Flow well at all to me, some parts it came together a bit, but most of it didnt at all

Vocab - 4/10 - didnt see any real good vocab there, which makes the rhymin alot easier

Lyricism -5/10- most of it was blah, but it had a few highlights in my opinion, no multies, but a nice attempt none the less.

Highlight(s) -

"Subliminal Messages in all of my quotes
I be teachin him bout rap as he sits there and takes notes"

"But Ima brush you away like Colgate Toothpaste"
^not really a good punch, more of a thump"

Overall - 4.3/10



Kash11 -

Flow -6/10- It was Decent and easy for most of it, but it did fall off in several parts

Vocab -5/10- Nothin too special that i saw, average and decent

Lyricism -6/10- a few nice multiples in there, not all came together with sense thats why it lacked some.

Highlight(s)-

"a loser, yea i found one, he claims to be a true fan or something/
we knows he not a true man or nothing, cuz its his hand hes humping/"

"we go do the same job, get money, and i steal your portoin/
leave your ass bankrupt like fuckin wheel of fortune/"

Overall - 5.6/10




VOTE ~ Kash11

True Fan =

I thought tha flow was off and tha rhyming was a little simple. So basically what Para said. Er, a coupla bits of wordplay type shit - like tha "brush you away like toothpaste" bit, which was tha only highlight for me.

Kash =

Flowed much better, but i couldn't get a coupla lines but that might be me. Lyrics were much better - harder rhymes and multies which were nice.
Nice bits:

" loser, yea i found one, he claims to be a true fan or something/
we knows he not a true man or nothing, cuz its his hand hes humping/"

&

"now climb down the ladder, cause u aint at the top line/
when im done, red stains all over your shirt like u painted a stop sign/
true fan of the man, your mom still walk with your hand in her hand/"

I thought tha "hand-in-hand" line would've flowed well in audio.

Okay - thats my considered opinion.

VOTE: KASH11

PZ>

UPPIN'

PZ>

so.........i win?

fuck mc1.. i was gonna let him vote, but i guess i will

ok...
trufan
tha toothpaste line wasnt 2 bad.. but your punch lines didnt hit2 hard...and it lacked multiples.. but it was anice stab

kash
had a good use of rhymin,, with good multiples and nice punches heer and there...
i liked tha tru fan of man.. hand in hand line

vote kash

yes you move on.. and pleez mc1 will you show me that your alive.. if not than OB will take over

:D