I'll keep this short and simple.

Y'all think u can rap
But u really ain't sayin jack
I try hard to listen
Cuz u think u r dissin
Missin the point
I'm down to earth
I say wat I gotta say
Dont care if u hate me
As long as I know I'm makin' it
U r all just fakin' it

Okay. I knowthe end needs work. But it ain't half bad for my first time, rite?
Anyway plz tell me what you think cuz it really is my first time bustin a rhyme or wateva.

it sucks dick and follow the rules and then ill tell u wat to work on.

This Boi...remember me...When I suched...Look out for my drops in the "Bus A Rhyme" section...

Review for this...
Ummm well this is going to be such a complicated review...
Ummm well where do I start??
Okay how about this

IT FUCKIN SUCKED

No multis, metas, punches...N its supposed to be a Fuckin Diss...

Man you need work...

Peace

What is the point of you coming here and taking shit if you cant rap,
Cuz your lines of your rhyme and your flow reaks of crap,
So take a friendly message from me ole chap,
Your just a phony disgrace of a freestylest, and nobody gonna clap,
for those weak 2 liners, and your sad excuse for a flow,
Cuz honestly I'd clear you from the table like a line of blow,
Spittin complex flows, make all of your weaknesses show,
I aint tryin to be a dick man Im just lettin you know,
That I'll show you the meaning of flow and it aint no luck,
Then I'll call your flows aloud agian, and leave you publicy stuck,
I'n an akward position, Where you continue to suck,
I think everyone agrees with me when I say "What the Fuck!?!?!"

iight man just quit//
u cant rap for shit//
just let it go and put an end to it//
dawg ive een rappin 4 a week so im new//
and yet i think i can rip better thatn u//
wut the fuck?//
we suck?//
look at ur rap again!//
and u'll see wat we mean//
stop spittin yah shit//
this aint a diss, its nothin//
i dont mean to sound redundent//
but im new and i can blow u away//
as if i was pakin an a.k.


how was that?? if u read uu kno i was new and im tryina get as much feedbak as possible

iight man i came 4 1 more rap cuzz this post iz buggin me//
know u beatin me is impossible as u winning a spelling bee//
ur flow sucked that was the worst attle rap ive ever heard//
goddamn man i read the 1st line and i got bored//
but i read ur rap just for laughs, and 4 tellin us we suck that was fuckin crap//
i would rather have it if u cept ur mouth shut kid//
cuzz im tellin u know man u cant rap 4 shit//
hey atleast u cept ur emberrasment level down a little//
cuzz u made it plane and simple//
cuzz im tellin u know man anymore of ur raps my eyes would be bleading//
our shit dont suck, it must be ur shit u reading//
fuck it, id rather have u cheating//
so just quit emidiatly//
im just sayin this 4 ur own good,dawg quit tryina spit//
fuck it atleast ittle save ur confidence a lil bit.



that wasnt that good but o well

Read the name of the thread - Y'all Suck

well like i said im new god.... if u read i started last monday

that was weak
your the one who sucks

Aiight man I understand that your new to this and thas kool,
But if you think you can take me in a flow, here's a lesson,
You should consider the fact that I aint retialiated a blessin,
Cuz there aint a damn person in this forum that your inpressin,
And if you really still think you beat me than you should take a second look,
Cuz my style is beyond those of you half way crooks,
Maybe you should took a bit more time to look it up in the books,
Cuz my ferocious flow of rhymes'll leave ya tattered and shook,
This is just a fare warning to your style of rhymin,
My flows are untouchable, just like the fuckin hope diamond,
I don't know where your style is at or who you be mimin',
But have you noticed that no one is positively replyin,
And if you still feel that you have my flows beat,
Bring it to the table, you'll soon find need to retreat,
Cuz P-Dub is official, a member of the elite,
So put a lid on it man and sit back in your fuckin seat.

i never said that i could fuckin take u//
i aint tryina impress people its called practice//
u had to do it too//
im just tryina get feed back//
relax, i wasnt makin fun of u//
ur so fuckin stupid dude//
dont start wiggin out and get all mad//
jeez u started out kool, but u can make a complament go bad//
its called anger manegment look for it//
u need it, wutz the brollem wit u beefin//
i meen realy u dissed him//
so i said shit i guess i will too//
but wut the fuck did i do to u?//
i just want possitive stuff not ur shit//
so wut ever just go die...BITCH!!
i meen realy

Od Evolves; And Revolves
Like This Gun Im Holden
Ur Dead Body Im Disposen
In Your Garbage Diposel To Soil The Seen
I Hate To Spoil Ur Dream
And Ruwen Ur Surprize
Stop If U Realy Wana See The Sun Rise
Other Wize, When Ur Mother Cryes
To Me, Ill Shut That Bitch Up With An Ohzy
And Then You Can Prove To Me
That We All Suck, Befor U Disgust
Me; We All Have Umpteen
More Rhymez To Dish At You
Wit Ur Additude
You Ant Gona Get Much Respect
So Ur Best Bet Is; Fucket You Must Jet
Bitch

And That Ant Even My Best
Ill Save The Rest Untill We Meat In A Battel
Or If You All Ready Didnt Skidadel

Bad Ass Good Dis Agent This Bitch Of An Mc

thanx yah see a GOOD feedback not a gay freestyle.

Cheeky Know If You Wana Battle Give Me A Holler

Damn dude look whos wiggin out,
I never raised my vioce over a pleasant shout,
I didn't diss on you because thats not what I'm about,
I grew up as a clean cut as a fuckin boy scout,

And man let's try to keeps these forums tame,
Because after all everyone rappin here is the same,
I don't start fueds becuase that shit is lame,
I'm tryin to lift you up, and light a spark for the flame,

I try not to offend people becuase it's not worth while,
Becuase I actually enjoy your new found style,
I have absolutely no problems with you or anyone,
I aint no hater, terrorist, or some pedifile,

I'm just another average joe and thats just it,
The only difference is the words I spit,
So take the "beef" or whatever and forget about that shit,
Cuz your alright to me and your style is legit,

Just remember if you ever wanna battle,
I have a tendency to serve others like cattle,
That don't mean I'm talkin shit, just don't call me a bitch,
Cuz Im the king of raps, and this forum is my castle,

So I guess thats it, I hope you accept the terms,
I got notta problem in the world, not a single concern,
Because when I flow I send a universal message of peace,
So grab the mic from me brotha, watch and learn,

You can flow just as good as anyone in the world,
Light that mic up like a shiny necklace of pearls,
Show the whole world, show every boy and girl,
And never accept a crooked path in life when it begins to curl,

This is a message to all those who read my raps,
Comin straight out a book,which is within my back pack,
Sittin in the back seat of my 1987 Caddillac,
Rap is a beautiful thing, more addictive than crack,

And I'ma keep on flowin, impressin and showin,
To show the whole damn nation exactly where I'm goin,
That's to the top, aint never gonna look back,
cuz I bring messages of peace, as I continue flowin,

I really didn't know you'd take it so seriously though,
My bad, I get carried away when I flow,
I am telling you now that there aint no beef,
I'm just a regular guy and I thought you should know.

u betta not be sayin i suck u fuckin pussy u dont even compare 2 me.

Cane Whyte, we know ur good do u alwayze have to brag?? and make fun of people who arent as good as u??

Cane Whyte, we know ur good do u alwayze have to brag?? and make fun of people who arent as good as u?? dude i was dissin the same dude u were dissin

dude i was dissin the same dude u were dissin


good point... but u go around sayen shit lyke that

yall talk too much shit