hey im sorta new to this whole rap thing, but ima try to make a battle rap and can guyz rate it 1-10? ok here it goez




im justa notha person that u cant see
i'll fuckin roll u up and smoke u like weed
u wanna bother me?, well i wont give u mercy
but my idea is that u run know,
i'll give u three seconds before i run down
then i'll wrap u in rope, and stab u wit brokin glass,
and sqirt lemon juice in ur open gashes,
it all matters on u words, fuck ur apperence
ur flows like dien in mah sleep i dont feel it
im still new, im calm unlike u, wen i get bood,
i dont get rude, and alwayze have an attitude,
naw but im jss playin witchu,
but seriously i'll have a razor slit u till they hafta staple stich u,
and do the same to ur bitch to,
do it 4 7 inches,
till sowin u back would b a wast of stiches.



i kno i kno, i fuckin suck... o well feedback? =))

hmm at leats it rhyme most cats come up and their shit dont even rhyme
just work on putting more detail and wordplay in and youll elevate

thnx clarity

BaD AsS, I can rate your shit. 7.

thanx man...i think

if ur new.. ill rate it a 6 cuz there was a few multis that flowed well but u needa b more creative and less basic. -keep elevatin-

yah iight kool thnx

...umm...wutz multies???... as i said i'm new.... so can sum1 answer me that?

naw but im jss playin witchu,
but seriously i'll have a razor slit u till they hafta staple stich u,




i aint tryna b a bitch or w.e cuz u cool.. but dont bite if u wanna elevate. even one line, jus post what u got so ppl can help u

" i got so many ways-to-diss-you that i'm playful-witchu/ i'll let a razor-slit-u til they hafta staple-stitch-u// and everybody in this fuckin place-will-miss-u if u try to turn my facial-tissue to a racial-issue"
--eminem rap olympics ..

i dont have a link i hadda type this myself, but if u download it u'll see...
there goes the flowin multi's i mentioned so imma rate it a 5.. again im not tryna diss u..jus tryna b helpful. keep elevatin

b to da that shit was alot better you progresed pritty quick

i aint tryna b a bitch or w.e cuz u cool.. but dont bite if u wanna elevate. even one line, jus post what u got so ppl can help u

" i got so many ways-to-diss-you that i'm playful-witchu/ i'll let a razor-slit-u til they hafta staple-stitch-u// and everybody in this fuckin place-will-miss-u if u try to turn my facial-tissue to a racial-issue"
--eminem rap olympics ..

i dont have a link i hadda type this myself, but if u download it u'll see...
there goes the flowin multi's i mentioned so imma rate it a 5.. again im not tryna diss u..jus tryna b helpful. keep elevatin





yah i made the rap off the top of my head, so i just thought of it but i couldnt think of wer that part came from...thnx for the tip tho..

b to da that shit was alot better you progresed pritty quick


thnx man

x0shady12? How the fuck you supposed to create that kinda name?

u admit urself u fuckin suck. u aint half as good as me fuck u

x0shady12? How the fuck you supposed to create that kinda name?

what the fuck r u talkin bout......

u admit urself u fuckin suck. u aint half as good as me fuck u


where the hell did that come from???

u admit urself u fuckin suck. u aint half as good as me fuck u

lmfao,u cant be serious.honesly,u suck.she would murder u in a battle,she would win hands down,probably with one line.if u think ur better than her then u seriously dont have a chance in hell in this rap shit.

cane is a dued

lmao,i know but i got it wrong,i thought he was talking to xoshady.

lmfao,u cant be serious.honesly,u suck.she would murder u in a battle,she would win hands down,probably with one line.if u think ur better than her then u seriously dont have a chance in hell in this rap shit.


lmao,i know but i got it wrong,i thought he was talking to xoshady.



lol honestly i think xoshady is the best rapper on here

i think ur shit got better. keep at it but dont ever diss me again.

i think ur shit got better. keep at it but dont ever diss me again.



wait, wait, wait, wait, are u talkin bout me??? cuzz if u are i never dissed u