6-12 Barz

~No CREW/Hate Votes

~24 Hour Deadline

bout to reveal the bitch in you
you try to conceal you hide behind you crew
but i see through
you nothing but a coward
you fuck with me and get devourd
i take you of the streets
fucken stomp you with my cleats
get blood on your car seats
...shit what am i sayin you dont get a fucken car
you cant even buy a fucken cigar
your a fucken joke
you fucken broke
ima make you fucken choke
ima make you bleed
ima make you plead
on the fucken floor
you a fucken hor
you cant take me dumb fuck
ya when you see me your star struck
cuz im the best an you suck

.................ooookkk

Im a make this as painless as I can

x cessively wack but not large enough I scar and cut=
and stab you in ya throat until you yell you ve had enough==(hahaha)
lIll remove ya brain through ya nose like egyptians
coke head= (egyptians remove brain through the nose)
jus like I stuck a cigarettes shells in ya mouth youll be
smoking lead==
this fag take it up the ass for cash but make less then he
takes=
damn that sad dawg you need to work on ya business mistakes==
your wack I smash ya brain like car at junkyard you think inside
the box=
ya verse is weak as hell all you did was talk==
by the time Im done with this kid the cops wont have enough chalk=
you got jus got scratch out like chicken pox

quick and weak but it was enough

flow: clarity (the other's shit is somehow flowless)
rhymes: clarity
structure: clarity
vocabs: Clarity

& X-L used the same word too many times (fuckin)..this is a fatal mistake.

Vote: Clarity

I know the last part didnt flow but I just finished it to reach the limit I guess 1-0

punches, rhymin, flow, vocab - clarity

2-0..........

everything clarity

vote - clarity.

3-0.......

this boi is part of your krew dosnt count

aight sombody else vote real fast