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50 years ago
05-27-2005, 12:11 AM
I don't even remember writing this...at all. But I saw it on my computer...and I was like :-O . It's nothing like what I usually write, it's a story... I think it's really good and has a moral. So um... check it out


*scratches* "She's in the attic...she's in the attic...she's in the attic..."

There was a frightful day, 20 years ago it started
Amy was so cute and special, she was a smart kid
We would play every night, on the monkey bars
We would shake and then fight til we laid with funky scars
December 8 was a different day, she said "Josh, do your best"
I gained speed and rammed into her, straight into her chest
She fell from those fateful bars, I heard a loud rippin sound
Just as she always does, but she didn't cry when she hit the ground
I helped her chest to mine, stressed to find no breath in her
How could I know that a normal fall would be the death of her?
Shock overtakes me , so it makes me make the wrong decision
They would blame the death on me, so I hid her among the livin
Blessed is the man who accepts death as a part of life
But this dear girl never had the chance to give her heart to Christ!
I die inside as I clutch her body and run away
Knowing innocence is dead, but guilt lives another day

Chorus;
Amy is dead right? Lost inside my mind
But this place in my mind
is a place she calls mine
And if this story is true
Why the fuck am I telling you?
By bringing you into Amy's ghost
I am failing you

I moved on over time, with a home and beautiful wife
I almost forgot that day, over time improving my life
But as I kissed my wife on the head, I shiver in panic
I hear shrieks and wails as I get in the attic
I merely went to grab a pen, think of yore and write
But I quickly shut the door, and fell to the floor in fright
"Dear God is this you? To punish me for my sins?
Is this Amy with a gate to Hell, searching for Revenge?"
I think back to weird phemomona I assumed were fakes
Some kind of sick joke, I saw a crucifix made with rakes
Or out the corner of my mind, there was an apparition
I tried to take a picture but just the grass...the ghost was missin
"Well Lord if this is punishment, let me face it with grace"
As I open the door to the attic and sheild my face
I see only a light, I open an eye and check around
Everything was in order, except when I look down
It was a single news clipping, but it made me gasp and sigh
It read "Girl survives near death incident, saved by passerby"
I fall to the floor and pray for forgiveness, I never even knew
Just because you assumesomethin it doesn't mean it's true


Chorus;
Amy is dead right? Lost inside my mind
But this place in my mind
is a place she calls mine
And if this story is true
Why the fuck am I telling you?
By bringing you into Amy's ghost
I am failing you

Jon Bon Jovi
05-27-2005, 07:22 PM
WOOOAAAHHHH Josh! That is fucking GOOD. One of the best ive read from you. Very deep..

unknown_
05-27-2005, 08:27 PM
that chick on the monkey bars got dealt with

50 years ago
05-27-2005, 10:25 PM
^lmao

Thanks Jade

BellaItalian
05-27-2005, 11:15 PM
FINALLY some good shit.. I like it a lot!!! WHOHHHA

50 years ago
05-27-2005, 11:49 PM
I personally think it's not my best lol, but thanks.

sanely_insane
05-28-2005, 12:55 AM
no its fucken awsome sick shit

BellaItalian
05-28-2005, 01:16 AM
I personally think it's not my best lol, but thanks.
^
Well its not everyday you get a compliment from me , I'm usually busting you ass over some shit but I really like it babe nice job :cool:

50 years ago
05-28-2005, 01:43 AM
Hey, at least someone is not hounding my ass.

Oly
05-28-2005, 04:43 AM
yea thats really nice. do you know if it was meant to be rapped by your self or sang. cause i almost picture some one singing that rather than rapping it. just curious

BellaItalian
05-28-2005, 11:19 AM
Hey, at least someone is not hounding my ass.
^ Yeah, it got boring to me :D but yeah oly he should sing it!

Jon Bon Jovi
05-28-2005, 11:42 AM
It is deffiently one of your best...

50 years ago
05-28-2005, 12:45 PM
It's kind of a.... sing/rap.

BellaItalian
05-28-2005, 04:46 PM
LOL everything you do doesn't need involve rap doof...

sanely_insane
05-28-2005, 05:07 PM
but it would sound good with both

50 years ago
05-28-2005, 08:53 PM
Well, I'm a RAPPER...so yeah, I'll mostly rap thank you very much.

BellaItalian
05-28-2005, 11:07 PM
True shady.. Josh no comment.. good song bitch

sanely_insane
05-28-2005, 11:21 PM
lmao one thing he deserves ass kissing and niceness is for his writing

BellaItalian
05-28-2005, 11:46 PM
LOL he does alot of that but its ok

50 years ago
05-29-2005, 12:53 AM
lmao one thing he deserves ass kissing and niceness is for his writing

I appreciate the love....

Jon Bon Jovi
05-29-2005, 08:58 AM
Youre not a rapper lol.......You rap. But youre not a rapper. When i see you on Shady Recrds ill class you as a rapper :p

BellaItalian
05-29-2005, 07:53 PM
^ Haha I agree with Jade, when we get the proof then call yourself what you want :) you may rap but you aren't a rapper yet... hii jade

Jon Bon Jovi
05-29-2005, 10:16 PM
Hey girl....Check your PMs ;)

BellaItalian
05-29-2005, 10:23 PM
I did AHAHAHAHAHA lol sorry I'm hyper!!

Jon Bon Jovi
05-29-2005, 10:57 PM
Yes..yes..I know you did my crazy chum! XD

BellaItalian
05-29-2005, 11:23 PM
Yuppp :D ehehehe

50 years ago
05-30-2005, 12:13 AM
As far as I know, a rapper is someone that raps...

BellaItalian
05-30-2005, 12:25 AM
Oooooohhh ok do you do that? *hmmmm sits and ponders thoughts*

Sapphire
05-30-2005, 09:31 AM
I really like this one:D