Darkness creeps upon the midnight air as the fog sets beneath the doorway to my room,
through the window's glass you crawl as an invisible essance untop of my naked flesh,
weeping to but tare into my skin,
you slowly sink your teeth upon the mound of human flesh you see sleeping upon the bed,
a squirt of blood screams silently through the air splashing the walls as you lean your head back in what seems to feel like pleasurable pain,
a glimps of a body that you cannot take but more from,
weakened in your knees you become clear as day only to hear me scream,
you cover my mouth and climb atop of me,
moving faster as your body becomes there, a
nd then gone again,
with each thrust you become visible to me,
with each pull you're gone,
head spinning in all direction you cannot but help to bite upon me again,
and again,
until there is nothing left,
but a corpse,
half alive,
but mostly dead
You smile and lay me upon my final resting ground
turning once more to see the cold
lonely
shattered flesh
drop and break against the demented floor

I liked it alot.. good writing. Keep it up.

very dark. I like it.

Good Kari! :)

yea too different then what I usually do, but meh, I was sittin here and just typed it so thanks!!

That's brilliant

I like it. I like it alot.

Didn't know you write poetry.

lol I have a lot of poetry....literally ;)

So i noticed in your recent threads.....you own the whole 1st page of this forum. LOL

i liked this you should keep on writing