okay...I'm just writting this here...off the top of my head k, so...give me feedback.

Tears of the girl whos invisible
who's life is now destroyed
the guy she wants girlfriend is really ugly
but he still wants her
skools don't want her
but some guys do
confusing,burning pain hits her mind
and the burning feeling goes down her cheek
she has nothing now to hold on to in this lifeless circle
All she has now....is tears.

okay, so...give me feedback.

Aww its nice :) Keep the writing up huni!

thanx and I just wrote that off the top of my head