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Jon Bon Jovi
05-18-2005, 04:23 PM
I feel myself grow more bitter and bitter
dont get it confused with being a bad person
its just hurt, this world has fucked me over too many times
SO many problems i could count but i dont have enough time
now i know why people abuse alcohol and drugs, it numbs the mind
i dont want to love but i love way too much
i dont want to feel anything but i feel it all
i dont want to hate but her i want to KILL
i want to scream, i want to die, yet i want to survive
i want to know why god picks on me
dont fucking call me no fucking drama queen
dont think i like this, everyday i think of suicide, its my lullaby
everyday is a fight againt me killing myself
i hate god, dont give a shit, if i end up scorchin in flames#
tell me why should i respect him, when he dont respect me?
i wos doomed, made to be a failure since day one

im getting more and more bitter, fuck this world
only want to show respect to few now
im getting more and more bitter, cant wait to see me laying in my coffin

50 years ago
05-18-2005, 04:28 PM
lol um... Very angry.

The beginning is real nice.

Sapphire
05-18-2005, 08:12 PM
nice jade...I liked it:D

sanely_insane
05-18-2005, 11:45 PM
fuck that was good, i know how u feel i think real raw real nice poem

Cain
05-19-2005, 01:16 AM
very chilling. I like it.

Slackerbitch
05-19-2005, 12:15 PM
heh... sounds like me. VERY nice.... me likey :D :D

Emzsweetheart
05-19-2005, 12:24 PM
I luved that...I can totally relate

Jon Bon Jovi
05-19-2005, 01:30 PM
lol thanks guys. I wrote that in like a 3 minute rush of anger :)

Slackerbitch
05-19-2005, 03:33 PM
lol.... its good :D :D

Sapphire
05-19-2005, 07:06 PM
Very good...hehe...though, most of your poetry is Jade:D

wordlife
05-20-2005, 12:10 AM
very good i liked it :)

Jon Bon Jovi
05-21-2005, 08:32 PM
Awesome, thanks guys :cool:

Diatribe
05-22-2005, 01:09 AM
dont think i like this, everyday i think of suicide, its my lullaby
everyday is a fight againt me killing myself

was that a cry for help but whateva thats good really good and angry which makes it better

Jon Bon Jovi
05-22-2005, 02:12 PM
lol it wosnt a cry for help. I wos just really angry when i wrote that. Im not really suicidal tho, just had some troubles recently. But im getting better. Im happpy today :)

Tanks do