View Full Version : Tournament Verse - Scorpio *Audio* (Need Some Feedback)


Skorpio
04-29-2005, 07:36 AM
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/scorpio1music.htm

Well Here It Iz, Thiz Iz Mah Verse Used In Tha Tournament To Battle Latinprince...... Mah Boii Mixed Tha Beat N Shyt For Me, I Think It'z Pretty Hot, Wat Does You Guyz Think??

Carnage™
04-29-2005, 09:38 AM
the beats hot and its mixed well.only thing is i think u need to be more on beat.ur just flowing it how u feel it should be.u cant do that,the beat decides how it should be flowed but u need to make the beat urs.if u can ride a beat it makes shitty lyrics sound good.obviously u had good lyrics coz u always do.ur delivery could be better aswell.u need to make people feel like ur doing it for them and just them not everyone who listens.i think u should listen to some acapellas to work on ur flow and delivery,thats wat i do.ive got like 15 acapellas and i just sit and listen to them and listen to wat the artist does and work on wat i dont do well.i mean im not saying ur wack dont take it that way,im just trying to tell u wat u need to work on.and hahahahahah my latinprince diss is on ur soundlcick page,how did u get it on there man,i couldnt get it on.thanx for putting it there its appreciated......

Skorpio
04-29-2005, 04:16 PM
Hahaha No Problem Man, But I Can't Do That Shyt You Just Said, It Would Take Dayz And Maybe Even Weekz To Just Make It Like That, Since Mah Equiment Sux Ass....... I Have To Record My Voice Seperate From Tha Beat And Then Lata Combine It In Wit Tha Beat, And I Know Some Partz Of It Don't Flow Rite, But Mah Boii Just Don't Get It When I Tell Him That Tha Beginning Or Intro To My Verse Haz To Start Off ON Beat Otherwise It Fuckz Up Tha Flow Through-Out Tha Whole Beat.......

Carnage™
04-29-2005, 04:26 PM
download audacity,thats wat i use,u can download it free just search for it on google and u can record over the beat instead of doing it separate.

Mc K
04-30-2005, 01:19 AM
wtf is up with your pan? vocals is all in the left

not much emotion need more of that

beats best part of this

flows ok but like i said u sound boring

and the pan bugz me


but yo keep at it



respect

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Skorpio
04-30-2005, 01:29 AM
wtf is up with your pan? vocals is all in the left

not much emotion need more of that

beats best part of this

flows ok but like i said u sound boring

and the pan bugz me


but yo keep at it



respect

1

Damn Didn't I Just Get Finished Tellin' Ya'll Nigga'z Bout Mah Equipment Man???

Mc K
04-30-2005, 01:31 AM
diddnt read other post just dropped my opinnion thats what u want right? anyway return the favor i got love for ya man no hate


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**just read the posts
anmd if he did tell that lata dude not to fuck with your pan

or send ur tracks to me


ill fix em

Skorpio
04-30-2005, 01:42 AM
It'z All Kool Man, Thanx For Tha Feed........