Aight. 20 lines, first to 5 votes let's do this shit.

I’m facing this Rotwilah just as a practice
I already know he just puts out wack shit
His rymes are like a Kamikazee wearin a helmet
There pointless and in no way will they help him
Throws out punch lines but they wont do no good
He gets his ass kicked ‘fore even walkin into the hood
He sheds blood like his mom on her reg
He’s goin nowhere in life and he’s thinkin, what a drag
Thinks hes a pothead, boastin bout chronics
He’s dumb as fuck like a retard on phonics
He’s an insect, I’m here to fumigate it
When I’m done with him he’ll be exterminated
Cause Im’a burn him with my rhymes like a Komodo
Then freeze his ass quicker then a 1 hr photo
Ima win this shit, there’s no denyin
You know your gonna lose this, I aint even tryin
I’ll whipe u away just like a squigy
Your second best, I’m Mario, your Luigy
I’m Ac/Dc, your the Beegee’s
Im always a new experience, just like a ouigy

Your turn...............

I'll put mine up later today or tomorow

Alright, that's fine

Okay here is my rhyme,

Now it is time once again for me to battle,
I'll hit his ass wit shit harder than an offensive tackle,
I walk down the street and flash my peice,
if your bullshit doesn't ceice I'll be forced to cover you in greese,
and roll you down a hill wit jagged rocks,
while your rollin' I'll practice shootin',wit my Glock
I'll bring it and throw them bose,
bust your eyes,lips,ears,and your nose,
Cuz like my women your nutin but a lil bitty hoe,
I can squash you wit my pinky bitch,ya know?
I'm a frequent user of drugs and violence,
That violence alon will leave you dead with silence,
I'm the scariest rapper you've ever laid eyes on,
This rhyme aint for real,its obvious I won,
Now its time for me to lay youto rest,
Cuz everyone knows but wont admit that I am the best
You'll never beat me why can't you see,
these victories never come easily,
You rap about me bein a practice match,
Shit you rap like a kid from the cabbage patch!

VOTE!!

really people, someone vote please

Ooh ooh!I vote for Rotwilah! :D JK,BTW that verse was pretty good after about four lines

tru--- change yer damn name, you got a pen name or sumthin???!!!

His rymes are like a Kamikazee wearin a helmet
There pointless and in no way will they help him

ummm this ones ok

I’ll whipe u away just like a squigy
Your second best, I’m Mario, your Luigy

This is the only other decent line

rotwilah

I'll bring it and throw them bose,
bust your eyes,lips,ears,and your nose,

twood av been betta if you included :ears throat and nose

udder den dat you guys need werk, don get me wrong, this shit is way better then what you posted against me, keep thinkin more about yer rhymes, don't just put werds that rhyme on pape... Also the stupid unclever violence, is dumb unless there is some kind of twist too it, like: i'll punch yer chest to get ya back

but if I hafta vote.... Trufanoftheman, btw like I said change yer name or sumthinget a pen name

Hmmm....

True:

Bad Lines-

I’m facing this Rotwilah just as a practice
I already know he just puts out wack shit
His rymes are like a Kamikazee wearin a helmet
There pointless and in no way will they help him

I’ll whipe u away just like a squigy
Your second best, I’m Mario, your Luigy
I’m Ac/Dc, your the Beegee’s
Im always a new experience, just like a ouigy

Good Lines:

He’s an insect, I’m here to fumigate it
When I’m done with him he’ll be exterminated
Cause Im’a burn him with my rhymes like a Komodo
Then freeze his ass quicker then a 1 hr photo
Ima win this shit, there’s no denyin
You know your gonna lose this, I aint even tryin


Rotwilah:
Bad Lines

Cuz like my women your nutin but a lil bitty hoe,
I can squash you wit my pinky bitch,ya know?
^^^DMX fan are we?

Good Lines:

I'm a frequent user of drugs and violence,
That violence alon will leave you dead with silence,
I'm the scariest rapper you've ever laid eyes on,
This rhyme aint for real,its obvious I won,
Now its time for me to lay youto rest,
Cuz everyone knows but wont admit that I am the best
You'll never beat me why can't you see,
these victories never come easily,
You rap about me bein a practice match,
Shit you rap like a kid from the cabbage patch!

Vote~Rotwilah

i'll vote for rotweiler, but i agree with tyke, you guys need some work. Here's what each of you need to work on, at least in my opinion:


TFOTM - One you kept saying you weren't even trying, and honestly that's what it looked like. To be honest, it makes it look like a total cop out. Also try to come with harder punchlines, and don't try so hard to think of one. Forced creativity is a bad bad thing.

Rotweilder - You were better, but also like tyke said, you shouldn't concentrate on rhyming as much. Try getting your lyrics to be a bit more original and clever, THEN try improving your rhyming skills. Just a hint anyways.

Anyways no beef, just giving you guys some advice, so don't take it personal.

Okay I won't say which lines I liked and disliked cuz its already been said.But anywayz I vote for ROTWILAH