I've been through the world
I've been to hell and back
I just wish my life
Would cut me some slack
Everything fuels my fire
Takes me back
To my funeral pyre

I see a code of honor
False love for some
Death for others
Immortalized
In dying cries

Wishing for a quick release
Something lost
Life's hanging lease
Take away
The pain we pay
Threads inside
Torn and died
I just wanted to
Fly back to my Messiah

No life in the cold tomb
Chilling breath
Forbidden room
Death lingers in the gloom
Take me away
Only the shell can stay

Always in every way a taker
Never going to remake her
Staying in the ever burning
Inject the holy saber
Stop the heart to cure the yearning
It's just death
The forgiving Messiah

lol...I keep coming to this forum, and have absolutely nothing to say but how awesome these poems are:D I feel like a record player that is just repeating herself to different people....I wish I had more to say!!!! I loved it Jon...but I love most of your posts...you're pretty darn awesome in all aspects:D

-blushing-
Thanks Sapphire. You should really see my face while I read this. I wasn't expecting such a quick response....let alone a good one.

:DYou're a sweetie Jon...glad to hear you're happy with what I had to say:D

Yeah, he does write and post amazing shit. Not "shit" i just use that word a lot like: DUDE, and LOL. lol...(see what i mean?) lol. So yeah, it was great as usual. You dont even need me or anyone else to tell you that. So, its a waste of a post. Well, actually not a waste but like-- well making you read this is a waste. As you can see i can go on and on and on...like the energy bunny (awhh the bunny is pink:))anyways...but i wont go on.


So basicallly in a nutshell my post is just saying "that was nice keep posting, i enjoy and love to read them"!

byE

Thanks both of you. I always enjoying seeing what people think of what I write. Especially you two.

^and me

Great work... actually even better than usual. REALLY relatable Jon. I love it.

You're probably saying it's better than usual because it sounds religious. lol jk
Thanks Josh.