the thousand new slits in my wrist just add to all tha rest of my suffering wounds
i cant take this so called life sh.it anymore
for some reason it seems like ive been through all this before
everywhere i look is just another fuc.kin backstabbing crook.
theres nobody i can trust
christ my heads gunna bust
people think i do this sh.it for attention,
i fuc.king hate all of you, not to mention.
this thing sucks
but i really dont give a fuc.k
its sh.it fuc.k it.
im gunna go find my bowl and take another hit.
its insane crazy my eyes are goin hazy
you all can say im lazy im jus laid back.
my lifes swaying way off track
its slowly turning wack.
i dont know what to do i dont know whos true.
im lost in life with nothing to look forward to.
you don't care so dont say you do.
dont act like u want me to be part of your crew.
i know what you guys say when im not around,
you think that i dont hear the sound?
its like all you mother fuc.kers are out to kill me.
maybe not physically but deffinately mentally.
im derranged
its all gone strange.
i need some help with this,
but ya'll wouldnt even give two squirts of pi.ss,
jus to help out a so called friend.
now i know nobody will be at my funeral in the end.



wasnt sure if u were allowed swears so i jus put a . in between the words?. its not that good either.. its one of my first ones so yeah..

i think its aight. its abit sad if you actually do this shit or go thorugh this shit but the poem is pretty good gurl. well done. keep on doing it and you can get better :)

Yeah, its an old one from when i was goin through a hard time.. shits gotten a lot better though.. Thanks!

Well i think its really good Cassababy, Well done! :D

Thanks! :)

good, very good, all you need to do is put the sentence structure into lines cause believe it or not it's more effective and more enjoyable to read. im not slagging you off im just trying to help you, give it a go and see what you think then and see what the replies are like then. it wont hurt.

ok ill try it.. Thanks!