Everything seems so clear
But when the vision returns
My faith lies broken
By my fear
My body burns
By the flames set on me
By your lies

I've never been this alone
I've never seen the thing
That makes me who I am
Until you left
Pain is my life
Rejection my blood
Empty to the good in the world

Building walls to cover up
The torn child within
Who has seen so much torment
From the worlds within
Locking myself way
Burning the display
The only thing to cure
Emotional agony
Is through physically torturing
Who I was and who I am

Smoking until I can't see straight
Drinking on another binge
High to counter this low
Crashing back down to Earth
Destroy myself for what I'm worth
And take away the feelings
That form my noose
To cut off who I am

I thought it would get better by the day
But going this way
Doesn't have me heading downhill
Not even heading uphill
I'm falling through the rocks
Falling down until I stop
Torturing my tortured soul
I'm heading downHell

Never would've seen myself on my knees
Giving just more weak pleas
To save me from my Hell
Forgetting you
Or your return
Either one could save me
But until then I'm falling
Down on jagged rocks
Tearing into me
Makes wounds that don't heal
They just bleed
I'm not even heading downhill
Or uphill any day
Because this pain just won't go away
I'm heading downHell

Wow, ur poems are always like...so deep in thought (i dont know if that makes sense to you, but yeah ...)its really good...you should like consider doing a book about poems or something....and show the world ur talent:D

I write poems that can be turned into songs. I'm a double threat on that aspect because I'm also a musician so once I come up with music for this...it's a song. I'm actually working on a couple of CDs of my own and going to write for a couple of Chicago local bands anyway so if they make it big I'm going to end up owning the rights to their material anyway because I wrote at least the lyrics and the guitar parts.

I write poems that can be turned into songs. I'm a double threat on that aspect because I'm also a musician so once I come up with music for this...it's a song. I'm actually working on a couple of CDs of my own and going to write for a couple of Chicago local bands anyway so if they make it big I'm going to end up owning the rights to their material anyway because I wrote at least the lyrics and the guitar parts.


Really? thats soo cool:) Good luck with your cd's then, i'm sure ur gona be great; especially since ur poems are amazing !!

He's copying my style...nah j/p, you know I love this Jon.

urge to kill rising. jk
Thanks both of you.

Thats really good! :O

:D
Thanks. Appreciate it.

so jelous:P lol u rite reli gud i wish i cud rite haf as gud as tha

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