Some days you make me go insane
Other days you just fuck with my brain
I’m trying to go down the right trail
But in your eyes I always fail
I wonder what it would take to make you see
Just how much you can trust me
I’m trying to make you proud
I want you to scream my name out loud
And not just to bitch about something small
I want you to say it while standing tall
Feel for me when I do good
Like any mother should
And if I do something bad
Don’t go ballistic and get all mad
Because that won’t change my action
Besides making you more of a fraction
In my mind
You’re one of a kind
But you have to get your head back online
And pull out the knife you stabbed in my spine
As I get older
My choices get bolder
I have the heart of a soldier
It’s about time you let go
And let me show you the things I know

nice i like its dope
propz check my poem out



gni 15
D R 88

I have the heart of a soldier



awh it was very good, i especially liked that part:D (anything that has: military, soliders, army, ect...i get interested in lol)

^^oppsyyy..i meant "SOLDIERS" not soliders lol :p

thanx xcrackheadx...

No Problem:D

wow thas really good wish i cud rite like that

This was very good. Sorry to hear that you have issues with your mom. I am sure she just wants what is best for you man. You have to know that = right? Especially if she is screaming at you a lot - that usually means that she is worried about you or she is not wanting you to get hurt. It's like a grizzley roaring at her cubs - you know?

Take care,

Tammy :cool:

yea tammy...i know she wants the best...but that doesnt mean that its my idea of the best...a lot has changed since the time when u n my mom were a kid compared to the kids now-a-days...ya know???but i c where ur comin from...n thanx...

That's pretty good :)