What is this thing
that I see in my dreams?
that makes me sing
over these bitter screams
I hurt deep inside
no matter how it may seem
Life is a lonely ride
that kills my low self esteem
or rather is my esteem
truly low for the people I know?
Playing without a team
these games are deceitful and droll
Please Jesus just save me
Rescue me from this sinful fire
These games are just crazy
I think I'd much rather retire
I love my friends and my music
and the love I share to my peers
but any second I might lose it
and just be seen for my fears
Please do not judge me at all
for my torturous, fracured existance
I really do see hope after my fall
It just lies far back in the distance
But nevertheless I will stand strong
I just need a little guidance to see
That if the my inner pain is to be gone
this pen is the noose, and this poem's the tree
I'm free

This is a very good poem sexorcist. I'm glad to see that you are not afraid to list that you have weaknesses...some people are uncomfortable with sharing such about themselves. You are right...there is hope after a fall, and sometimes it isn't that far in the distance.

Yeah, that sounded deep...and as ^ said it there is hope after a fall...bad stuff happens to make us stronger.

Thanks...yeah, it's about how I get escape through my music :D

Well, if that works for you continue writing it:) ITs good for you, and us to read it:D

Thanks.......