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Cain
12-30-2004, 03:43 AM
Icy claws reach in my back
Tearing through the spinal slack
Memories blank
Body corrodes
And it's the fault of one person

Red hot ice
Metal digs in
War is the abominable sin
Tearing through the minds of man
Staggered off to kill again
A new reprieve from battle lust
As the old bones turn to dust
Only power makes the rules
Even if you don't want to play
So run on away
Either way you'll die like soldiers do

Fallen in battle but non-combatant
So faithful but unreliant
Taking lives through whatever means
Losing lives to show the skills
Of American saints

Nuclear judgement
Failure to comply
Is it people's fault
That they don't want to die
Winds blow to and fro
Unleashed the bowels of Hell
To shatter the skin
We might miss completely
But then only consequences
Is destruction from military gluttons
Won't be seen through the years to com

Ruling disease
Ruling the seas
Ruling even the air
But when the world's
Clouded over with darkness
I can see the monsters now
In office
Spreading disease like a dog
Boiling the seas
And burning the air

I'M THE BOSS
12-30-2004, 12:30 PM
OMG....this was my favourite....lol..okay i know i sound insane....but well my two friends are going to the army and like everytime i hear about: war, military, army, soldiers; well i always get interested....SO YEAH UR LIKE AMAZING...and ur poems are so like perfect especially this one:D

Cain
12-31-2004, 05:52 AM
Well I can honestly say I wasn't expecting that kind of response for something that verbally tries to show the horrors and atrocities of war. But anyway thanks.

I'M THE BOSS
12-31-2004, 01:46 PM
lol^ Well i am against war and all...lol...dont think that im up for it and stuff...but i get really interested as i wrote before since i know people that are going to the canadian army thingy!
So yeah it was great!!!:)

Cain
01-01-2005, 03:18 AM
Ah. Well either way thank you. I appreciate it.